Storm Arrows
A meditation on seasons3 total reviews
Comment from AnncFl
Very nicely done what is a storm shot arrow? What are gray geese aimed at spring? Does it mean they are headed north? Other than my not understanding these points, is a good poem. Keep up the good work.
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Very nicely done what is a storm shot arrow? What are gray geese aimed at spring? Does it mean they are headed north? Other than my not understanding these points, is a good poem. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
Comment from HKZSquared
For a 5-7-5 it was all there lyrically but it could have been made better! Good luck with more poems & hope they're pretty good!
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For a 5-7-5 it was all there lyrically but it could have been made better! Good luck with more poems & hope they're pretty good!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
Comment from ScarletClearwater
You aren't supposed to advertise your site on this site. Don't want you to get in trouble. I liked the poem though. Nice imagery with the use of the arrows. Great job!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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You aren't supposed to advertise your site on this site. Don't want you to get in trouble. I liked the poem though. Nice imagery with the use of the arrows. Great job!
Comment Written 16-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thanks for taking a look. I'd better peruse the rules of the site more closely.
