Comment from adewpearl

Good

khush, you have misunderstood the rules for the 5/7/5 and this contest.
A 5/7/5 poem is only three lines in length.
The first line consists of 5 syllables.
The second line contains 7 syllables.
The third line includes 5 syllables.
it's always that this thought - add the apostrophe for contraction of it is
it's just fr me - add the apostrophe and change fr to for
there are several other places you need an apostrophe in it's
good touches of alliteration in phrases like my moment and my mind
thoughtful expression of emotion
Brooke

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2012

Yes know I have understood the rules and the kind of 5/7/5 poetry thanx for guidance :)Mr adew

Comment from Tutubowser

Excellent

excellent, I felt every word cause I know how you feel and the way you express your compassion of love for that person I understand thank you... Tutu

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012

thanxx all ur words will inspire me to write more nd a lot bttr den jst this...:)

Comment from Heaven Bound

Average

I don't want to be too harsh or critical here, but this one just doesn't work for me. There are many misspellings. For me, there isn't a flow; it was challenging to read to get to the end. The title area indicates this to be a 5-7-5 poem, but that clearly is not the case. I'll leave it at that.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012

thanx respect your review ,to write nd become more better i really need good advices and guidance for sure i will work better on next one ...:)

Comment from J. Dark

Excellent

I loved this piece of genuinely heartfelt poetry, particularly the honesty and acceptance expressed at the ending. Well done, this was truly lovely and refreshing.

 Comment Written 14-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2012

Thanx for appreciation it really means a lot as it will inspire nd encourage me more to write nd more better ...:)