Comment from rushingwater

Excellent

Well now this was loaded with thought provoking questions. I like the repeating words remember me. I also enjoyed the flow not all would but I sure did. Good job!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012

Excellent much obliged....do you know who I am?

reply by rushingwater on 12-Aug-2012

I am still asking that question! I sway one way then curve another. So I dare not guess.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012

well in this poem I am Hitler...this was actually what turned him into the meglamanic that he was...

He saw a picture of Christ sitting upon his white horse of judgement and said to himself...I am providence...!

True Story...

reply by rushingwater on 12-Aug-2012

Now that makes sense...I was leaning towards Christ and I knew of the horse.. but that is just flipping wild and seriously makes you think even deeper things about the whole cosmic thing and the purpose behind every scene that plays out in history. Thank you for the deep walk.

reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012

Anytime...

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

I'm stifled B... or indeed i would give you a six
this was great ..clever and creative and different always love something different
great use of imagery as well
thanks for the read always a pleasure

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2012

Hey...T have you ever heard this stuff before...it sounds a bit familiar...?