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mystery of light

where the light is coming from

2 total reviews 
Comment from rushingwater
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I found this very thought provoking and open for many interpretations. The only thing I would suggest is changing the font to lighter color as it was hard to read. Otherwise I enjoyed this. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2012

Comment from mumsyone
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Your poem does not show up on the page unless it is highlighted. You might want to change the color of the font. I like the thought you've presented here. Good job.

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2012