Derriere
Paying Homage to a great ASSet ...44 total reviews
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Always a fun read when yo post.
Your usual tongue-in cheek humour always entertains and you do so in such a lovely sneaky way.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Always a fun read when yo post.
Your usual tongue-in cheek humour always entertains and you do so in such a lovely sneaky way.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha...thanks for echoing my cheeky sentiments.
Cheers closet xo
Comment from Writingfundimension
Hi, closet. What a fab contest entry. You had me totally left-footed with your great ending. I think the picture is perfect for your poem.
Your style of humor is always such a delight to read. I could never create a poem like this in a million years. I think you should win the contest for sheer creativity! Good luck. Hugs, Bevarooni
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Hi, closet. What a fab contest entry. You had me totally left-footed with your great ending. I think the picture is perfect for your poem.
Your style of humor is always such a delight to read. I could never create a poem like this in a million years. I think you should win the contest for sheer creativity! Good luck. Hugs, Bevarooni
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Awww thanks Bevski...most appreciate your thoughtful comments.
Hope you are keeping well. Glad you enjoyed the read.
Cheers closet xoxo
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You're very wselcome, closet, as always! XoX
Comment from joann r romei
This is cute and written for all those ass men, lol, the pic seems artistic to me , but on this site who knows,.. mine is beginning to have a kardashian shape, luckily its en vogue these days or i wouldnt leave the house! Good job
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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This is cute and written for all those ass men, lol, the pic seems artistic to me , but on this site who knows,.. mine is beginning to have a kardashian shape, luckily its en vogue these days or i wouldnt leave the house! Good job
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha...A Kardy bum huh? LOL Crack up review sister! LOL
Thanks so much, most appreciated.
Cheers closet xo
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If it keeps growing, and their show gets canceled... I wont be laughing anymore
Comment from rushingwater
Phillipa you are too dang funny girl... I am reading this thing aloud and my husband is looking at me as though I had four heads... then I get to the last part and we both busted out in laughter. Brilliant and how long have you had this in your arsenal? .. LOL... I loved it. Well done ... I have missed you so welcome back! ~Hugs! Angela
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Phillipa you are too dang funny girl... I am reading this thing aloud and my husband is looking at me as though I had four heads... then I get to the last part and we both busted out in laughter. Brilliant and how long have you had this in your arsenal? .. LOL... I loved it. Well done ... I have missed you so welcome back! ~Hugs! Angela
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha thanks rushy...I appreciate your dang sixer and glad you liked what I stashed at the rear! LOL
Didn't have it in the arsenal for long...it begged for immediate release so I had to let it fly. The butt is enjoying all the responses but I think the chair is now jealous! LOL
Cheers and thanks so much and missed you right back...talk soon.
Phillippa xoxo
Comment from Melspoems
Lol, very funny ending stanza :-)
Clever second stanza, with the word choices and the reader not yet knowing it is the chair talking.
Nice flow and rhymes in each stanza, and good smooth fitting repeating lines.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Lol, very funny ending stanza :-)
Clever second stanza, with the word choices and the reader not yet knowing it is the chair talking.
Nice flow and rhymes in each stanza, and good smooth fitting repeating lines.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha, thanks Mel...glad you enjoyed my chair talk.
Cheers closet
Comment from Eliza M
This is deliciously clever! Skilfully composed, you lead the reader compellingly to the humorous twist. Love it! I don't think you need worry about the artwork, it enhances your poem perfectly. Inspired! Welldone!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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This is deliciously clever! Skilfully composed, you lead the reader compellingly to the humorous twist. Love it! I don't think you need worry about the artwork, it enhances your poem perfectly. Inspired! Welldone!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks for a deliciously appreciative review.
Cheers Closet
Comment from Jean Lutz
A sit-down let-down. Hey, flaunt it while you can. There are many kinds of chairs -- straight back, hard seats and saggy easy chairs. The same applies to rears.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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A sit-down let-down. Hey, flaunt it while you can. There are many kinds of chairs -- straight back, hard seats and saggy easy chairs. The same applies to rears.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks Jean...most appreciate your tongue in cheek review.
Cheers closet xoxo
Comment from Sally Carter
Oh Clops, this is so YOU! Very cleverly done.
Of course, you totally had me fooled in verse two, and I wondered where the heck this was going.
Refreshing to see a funny triolet - well three funny triolets.
No I don't think the picture is too hot. I certainly don't think it warrants a yellow and black stripe jobbie.
"One sided love affair" is so neat, as is the whole thing.
Best of luck with such an original entry.
Sal xx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Oh Clops, this is so YOU! Very cleverly done.
Of course, you totally had me fooled in verse two, and I wondered where the heck this was going.
Refreshing to see a funny triolet - well three funny triolets.
No I don't think the picture is too hot. I certainly don't think it warrants a yellow and black stripe jobbie.
"One sided love affair" is so neat, as is the whole thing.
Best of luck with such an original entry.
Sal xx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks Sal, most appreciate your delightful response to my butt cracks! LOL
Cheers Clops xoxo I changed it to lop-sided then back to one-sided as it lent itself perfectly to the bum to chair factor. Thanks for noticing.
Comment from percival86jack
Now this is naughty... nothing wrong with naughty... love naughty! Is it warm in here or is it just me! LOL Delicious image my dear friend from Oz! Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Now this is naughty... nothing wrong with naughty... love naughty! Is it warm in here or is it just me! LOL Delicious image my dear friend from Oz! Hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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LOL Thanks Jack and I agree, nothin wrong with naughty at all.
Yep...I think its warm in here! LMAO
Cheers and thanks a bunch...CloPo xoxo
Comment from cvcopac
Bad girl.I'm feeling poorly but you got a laugh out of me anyway. Cleverly written, suggestive, a bit bawdy but written with great style and cleanly presented. Interesting all the way through and good iambics, syntax, enjambment and rhyme. I like the vocabulary used here.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Bad girl.I'm feeling poorly but you got a laugh out of me anyway. Cleverly written, suggestive, a bit bawdy but written with great style and cleanly presented. Interesting all the way through and good iambics, syntax, enjambment and rhyme. I like the vocabulary used here.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha, well if you can enjoy a laugh when you are feeling poorly, I am glad to have tickled your funny bone Kenneth. LOL
Loved your review and sixer, thanks so much.
Cheers Phillippa xo
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I feel you have a winner here. I thought maybe the third triolet would escalate the sensuality but you tricked us. Salute, Kenny
