Derriere
Paying Homage to a great ASSet ...44 total reviews
Comment from Meta~Mark
WOW- the picture obviosuly catches the readers attention then the words flow in a sensual cheeky splendor of passion..
bravo!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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WOW- the picture obviosuly catches the readers attention then the words flow in a sensual cheeky splendor of passion..
bravo!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Wow great review - thanks.
Cheers closet
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It's brilliant, I can see why I am "behind" you for best received of the day, lol, ;-)
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Butts do it every time Mark! LOL
Either that or I am completely ar*sey today.
Haha
x
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Haha, indeed its not a bad place to be! LMAO
Thanks again
Comment from Connie C
Yeah, you're back! And you're back with a bang! Love this triple Triolet--wish I'd thought to expand mine given how hard it is to say much in so few lines, especially when half the lines are repeated. And, of course, you wouldn't be our Closet if you didn't come back with something sexy or that didn't require a warning. Hmmm . . . Love the part about the "rigidness" when your skin is bare--just gets your reader going with all kinds of thoughts not particularly related to a chair. As for the picture you chose, I don't know how the judges will regard it, but seems like a good fit to me. I've missed you being around, Sweetie, and was just telling Bill that tonight at dinner. I was going to take a night away from the computer and just read, for a change. But I saw your posting and had to at least review--glad I did! Lots of hugs go you, my dear. Connie xoxoxo
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Yeah, you're back! And you're back with a bang! Love this triple Triolet--wish I'd thought to expand mine given how hard it is to say much in so few lines, especially when half the lines are repeated. And, of course, you wouldn't be our Closet if you didn't come back with something sexy or that didn't require a warning. Hmmm . . . Love the part about the "rigidness" when your skin is bare--just gets your reader going with all kinds of thoughts not particularly related to a chair. As for the picture you chose, I don't know how the judges will regard it, but seems like a good fit to me. I've missed you being around, Sweetie, and was just telling Bill that tonight at dinner. I was going to take a night away from the computer and just read, for a change. But I saw your posting and had to at least review--glad I did! Lots of hugs go you, my dear. Connie xoxoxo
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Haha thanks Connie...I wanted to personify the chair quite simply and this is what it evolved into. LMAO Thanks for a superb review. Miss you lots lady. Life is too flat out at the mo. LOL
Cheers Phillippa xoxoxo
Comment from Gungalo
This Triolet deserves a six and you shall have it. A triple effort on your part has given us triple the entertainment and at triple the the joy. It is wonderful Closet and has used the right amount of syllables in each line and repeated where necessary. Not to mention the chair. Whoooooooooooooie!
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This Triolet deserves a six and you shall have it. A triple effort on your part has given us triple the entertainment and at triple the the joy. It is wonderful Closet and has used the right amount of syllables in each line and repeated where necessary. Not to mention the chair. Whoooooooooooooie!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks very much Gunga. Most appreciate your sixer and thoughtful review. Yes that is one lucky chair! LOL
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Comment from rhymelord
Dear Phillippa,
A great romp in perfect rhyme and metre. I was most definitely thinking along rather more biological lines than the holder of the derriere being a piece of furniture. (A dirty mind is a joy forever). Good lick in the comp, but I do believe the spelling is "derriere".
Regards
Reg
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Dear Phillippa,
A great romp in perfect rhyme and metre. I was most definitely thinking along rather more biological lines than the holder of the derriere being a piece of furniture. (A dirty mind is a joy forever). Good lick in the comp, but I do believe the spelling is "derriere".
Regards
Reg
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Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much Reg, appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers Phillippa xo
