Derriere
Paying Homage to a great ASSet ...44 total reviews
Comment from Jim Lorson Sr
There is nothing finer than a classic high round derriere, nothing except for a great set of legs to hold it up. That is such an amazing sight.
This artwork is hot. It is absolutely a perfect compliment to your hot verses. Also, your rhyme scheme moves and flows well. Good luck my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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There is nothing finer than a classic high round derriere, nothing except for a great set of legs to hold it up. That is such an amazing sight.
This artwork is hot. It is absolutely a perfect compliment to your hot verses. Also, your rhyme scheme moves and flows well. Good luck my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much Jim, your comments were choice. Most appreciate your appreciative review fcr a fine rear and the pins to hold it up. I agree, she IS hot! Oh to have some flesh like that again. I guess a girl can dream! LMAO
Cheers Closet
Comment from strandregs
As I can give it so I shall because it is a wonderful read and a pleasure and it appeals to my sense of sausagness
from fields afar I send a kiss
cause your brill humour I do miss.Z.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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As I can give it so I shall because it is a wonderful read and a pleasure and it appeals to my sense of sausagness
from fields afar I send a kiss
cause your brill humour I do miss.Z.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Wow Z, thanks so much. Loved your review and sixer rating. Most appreciated.
Cheers closet xo
Comment from MumEsGirl
Nice work. I really got a giggle from this when I finally saw through the double entendre.
Well written from the chairs point of view, although I suspect you have a soft spot for the silky feel of a rounded derriere yourself
hugs
kate
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Nice work. I really got a giggle from this when I finally saw through the double entendre.
Well written from the chairs point of view, although I suspect you have a soft spot for the silky feel of a rounded derriere yourself
hugs
kate
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Thanks so much. Most appreciate your thoughtful review Kate.
Cheers closet
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, closetpoetjester, you did an excellent job writing this cheeky triolet that bares all for the world to see. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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this is very well written, closetpoetjester, you did an excellent job writing this cheeky triolet that bares all for the world to see. i enjoyed reading it. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Hey jaxy I appreciate your thoughtful review.
Cheers closet
Comment from sibhus
Ja, can see that, wouldn't minding that chair. The picture sets the mood for your poem. Nice words that are so smooth and erotic. Has the silkiness of mid-afternoon tease the describe and titalize at the same time. A really good job of a triolet. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Ja, can see that, wouldn't minding that chair. The picture sets the mood for your poem. Nice words that are so smooth and erotic. Has the silkiness of mid-afternoon tease the describe and titalize at the same time. A really good job of a triolet. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Haha thanks so much, glad you enjoyed my poem
Cheers closet
Comment from Spitfire
This is a riot. And a perfect picture. Of course, sex-minded me read another meaning until the word "chair" appeared. Mass appeal is also funny so many people are obese these days. Six for being so clever, Philippa.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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This is a riot. And a perfect picture. Of course, sex-minded me read another meaning until the word "chair" appeared. Mass appeal is also funny so many people are obese these days. Six for being so clever, Philippa.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Hey Spitty thanks so much, most appreciate your sixer rating and delightful review.
Cheers P
xo
Comment from Earl of Oxford
Hi, P
'ASS-et' LMAO (excuse abbreviated pun - 'Laugh My ARSE off')
THREE stanzas of triolet, eh - you flash bugger. :-)
'A cheeky squeeze I long to steal' - LOL at the 'cheeky' ambiguity.
I was slightly confused by 'my wood is real' ('woody' being slang for a male erection, and there's nothing male about YOU), till the 'gotcha' at the end.
'arsey deal' - Haha.
Great fun and clever write.
I'll save a sixer for you for when you may need help to get on the front page, as I see you already have a plenty here, and so deserved.
Now I know where I'm missing out on the romance stakes - my 'chair' is made of leather (well, the cheap imitation of it) and not 'wood'. Oh well, I'll pretend it's passionate about my arse. Hey, I just gave it (the chair) some strokes, and I'm sure it responded. Mmmm... :-)
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Hi, P
'ASS-et' LMAO (excuse abbreviated pun - 'Laugh My ARSE off')
THREE stanzas of triolet, eh - you flash bugger. :-)
'A cheeky squeeze I long to steal' - LOL at the 'cheeky' ambiguity.
I was slightly confused by 'my wood is real' ('woody' being slang for a male erection, and there's nothing male about YOU), till the 'gotcha' at the end.
'arsey deal' - Haha.
Great fun and clever write.
I'll save a sixer for you for when you may need help to get on the front page, as I see you already have a plenty here, and so deserved.
Now I know where I'm missing out on the romance stakes - my 'chair' is made of leather (well, the cheap imitation of it) and not 'wood'. Oh well, I'll pretend it's passionate about my arse. Hey, I just gave it (the chair) some strokes, and I'm sure it responded. Mmmm... :-)
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Hi Ray, thanks for a terrific review. This was NOT necessarily written from a female pov. If it was, the arse groping and fondling would be summarized a little differently.
Grrrr. LOL
Cheers P
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PS...Sounds like you have one of those ergonomic chairs...with all the bells whistles and vibrations...now THAT's a chair! LOL
PPS. The "woody" WAS intentional but as I said...this WAS intended to sound like a male pov. However with all that said I LOVE a great arse. Thats part of my criteria for selection. It don't matter about the head...a great arse gets your leg right in the door! Hahaha
Comment from Father Flaps
Ah, closetpoetjester, to be that bench!
What a great piece of personification! Three triolets for the price of one! This will indeed be a contender in the contest...Much luck to you! Loved the surprise in your third verse,
"But that's because I AM the chair".
Loved this line, and its repetition,
"The softness of your derriere"
If I was going to change anything, and that's a big IF, it would be this,
"my wood is real" ...I'm not positive why... it just seems slightly weak or overstated perhaps. I don't know.
But on the whole, oh to be that bench!!!
cheers
Kimbob
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Ah, closetpoetjester, to be that bench!
What a great piece of personification! Three triolets for the price of one! This will indeed be a contender in the contest...Much luck to you! Loved the surprise in your third verse,
"But that's because I AM the chair".
Loved this line, and its repetition,
"The softness of your derriere"
If I was going to change anything, and that's a big IF, it would be this,
"my wood is real" ...I'm not positive why... it just seems slightly weak or overstated perhaps. I don't know.
But on the whole, oh to be that bench!!!
cheers
Kimbob
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Haha thanks FF I appreciate the sixer rating and enchanting response to the chair's appreciation of the derriere.
I couldn't go past using the wood and agree I could possibly have put a little more polish on it.
Cheers and thanks again, most enjoyed your review.
Closet
Comment from catch22
Ha ha! This is hilarious and clever--maybe too much for the contest--but I love it:) The lines flow smooth as "silk" (no pun intended) and I love the repeating line choices because they misdirected me to thinking this was about a person. Most original and unique set of triolets, but refreshing to say the least. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Ha ha! This is hilarious and clever--maybe too much for the contest--but I love it:) The lines flow smooth as "silk" (no pun intended) and I love the repeating line choices because they misdirected me to thinking this was about a person. Most original and unique set of triolets, but refreshing to say the least. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2012
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Wow thanks so much for the sixer rating gail and thoughtful review.
Most appreciate it.
Cheers closet xo
Comment from Ankh
Hahaha this is brilliant. I was sucked right in. I thought you were writing from a bloke's point of view at first. Nicely done Phillippa. I love this one :-)
Seth x
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Hahaha this is brilliant. I was sucked right in. I thought you were writing from a bloke's point of view at first. Nicely done Phillippa. I love this one :-)
Seth x
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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LOL Thanks Seth...typical bloke...sucked in by talk of a great arse. Haha
Thanks for the six, most appreciated.
Cheers P
