Comment from sweetwoodjax

Excellent

this is very well written, bicpen, you did an excellent job wriitng this poem about the love and grace God shed on us when He saved us from our sin to make us a new creature in Him.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Thanks SWJ, much appreciated...

Comment from Shari_K

Excellent

I like how you used Mercy as the subject. Interesting poem and very creative way of describing your conversion. Great rhymes as well. Excellent poem!

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Many thanks.

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

i love the idea of mercy: you have captured its essence well. i especially love the satori:
"Here is mercy; my God loved me;
Beloved Son: beloved Christ."
all is forgiven.

thank you for sharing!

rebekka x

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 Comment Written 03-Aug-2012

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2012

Thanks rebekka xxx.