A Soldier of Christ
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Comment from THE FREAK
the ever waiting answer from the almighty is painful and yet we must remain humble for we wait for one day, that one day where something extremely perplexing comes to mind; and we know he has answered our suffering calls for grace.
Once again you have out done yourself my friend, very liberal, insight with peace towards yourself and others. Great job... It really is a true testament for hope for I have acute dyslexia; and yet, I love to write. Stressful to always be checking my work time and time again, but that is my burden, my mercy!
THE FREAK
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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the ever waiting answer from the almighty is painful and yet we must remain humble for we wait for one day, that one day where something extremely perplexing comes to mind; and we know he has answered our suffering calls for grace.
Once again you have out done yourself my friend, very liberal, insight with peace towards yourself and others. Great job... It really is a true testament for hope for I have acute dyslexia; and yet, I love to write. Stressful to always be checking my work time and time again, but that is my burden, my mercy!
THE FREAK
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thanks THE FREAK...my own mind has not all of its own capabilities either and from time to time I could sware I have a touch of the old dyslexia which means that when I am checking my work some of the lines are not as they should be and especially with iambs I have to keep checking till my brain hurts...
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A GOOD WRITE WITH IMAGERY AND WELL WRITTEN. A good descriptive write of the poems spiritual message and you have displayed it well. I seen no need to edit. Mary
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A GOOD WRITE WITH IMAGERY AND WELL WRITTEN. A good descriptive write of the poems spiritual message and you have displayed it well. I seen no need to edit. Mary
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
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Many thanks.
Comment from misscookie
I can relate to your poem for I had and once in a while I get on that path again.
then I re member tha God's please in watching us do what is right, therefore.
Hes allows us time and room for mistakes.
But eventually, He withdraw His protedtion until we cry out and return to Him.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I can relate to your poem for I had and once in a while I get on that path again.
then I re member tha God's please in watching us do what is right, therefore.
Hes allows us time and room for mistakes.
But eventually, He withdraw His protedtion until we cry out and return to Him.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Unfortunately thats the way it goes misscookie, but fortunately he is always there for the return, hence, the upkeeping of his everlasting arms.
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Amen, Amen!
Comment from Heaven Bound
Really nicely worded. I like this a lot. I reviewed another of your works in the past couple of days, and seem to recall it have the bright white font and black background. If I'm correct about that, is there a particular reason you have chosen that. The only comment I would make is about the use of "him" in reference to God. I know it is not a requirement, but I use "Him" when referring to God. Just wonder if you've considered that?
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Really nicely worded. I like this a lot. I reviewed another of your works in the past couple of days, and seem to recall it have the bright white font and black background. If I'm correct about that, is there a particular reason you have chosen that. The only comment I would make is about the use of "him" in reference to God. I know it is not a requirement, but I use "Him" when referring to God. Just wonder if you've considered that?
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Maybe revise though I see no real need...
Comment from Doubledare1
This is such a sweet poem and so true. It is hard not to be touched by God's amazing, unconditional, and so undeserved love. So nicely expressed in words. I love the last line!
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This is such a sweet poem and so true. It is hard not to be touched by God's amazing, unconditional, and so undeserved love. So nicely expressed in words. I love the last line!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
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Glad you could enjoy.
Comment from xxjsfuncxxxity
A great demonstration of faith and love this poem. well done. Thanks for sharing it here, and thanks for the 8 points and 1.02 member dollars.
cheers
js
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A great demonstration of faith and love this poem. well done. Thanks for sharing it here, and thanks for the 8 points and 1.02 member dollars.
cheers
js
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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The more the merrier...
Comment from fictionwriter
He loved us all enought to come down and sacrifice himself to save all who ever will grace this wonderful planet, and then some. Well done.
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He loved us all enought to come down and sacrifice himself to save all who ever will grace this wonderful planet, and then some. Well done.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
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Many thanks.
Comment from oozer
i just thought I would like to ask you if you had written:
'Here is mercy
Beloved Son:Beloved Christ
My God loved me'
would it by any chance be the best last line?
I only asked.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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i just thought I would like to ask you if you had written:
'Here is mercy
Beloved Son:Beloved Christ
My God loved me'
would it by any chance be the best last line?
I only asked.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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I did not really go around messing with the last couplet I prefer it to have a solemn and profound feeling and sentiment about it and the way I have it does it for me. Also this way would have messed up the meter.
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem. The author did a beautiful job on this
write- a great description of mercy. The poem flowed and connected well. The artwork was perfect and enhanced the read. Thank you for a well written poem..............harmony13
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Excellent Poem. The author did a beautiful job on this
write- a great description of mercy. The poem flowed and connected well. The artwork was perfect and enhanced the read. Thank you for a well written poem..............harmony13
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
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Thanks H.
Comment from TammyGail
and yet again you did such an amazing job with this poem Bicpen.. So very heartfelt and touching - lovely imagery and stunning work on your formatting.. thanks for sharing another excellent piece of writing
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and yet again you did such an amazing job with this poem Bicpen.. So very heartfelt and touching - lovely imagery and stunning work on your formatting.. thanks for sharing another excellent piece of writing
Comment Written 03-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Tanks T, much appreciated.
