A Soldier of Christ
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Mercy"Metre ... Mixed
33 total reviews
Comment from Pugs
Very nice rhythm to this piece, I really liked it. Great presentation with that shocked heart. Perfect. And I thank Him daily for that mercy you described so very well
Pugs
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Very nice rhythm to this piece, I really liked it. Great presentation with that shocked heart. Perfect. And I thank Him daily for that mercy you described so very well
Pugs
Comment Written 15-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2012
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Thanks pugs much appreciated.
Comment from Mike K2
I was dumb enough to ask God, "What am I to you?" After a couple of years it came back answered, "You are his eyes and ears." Not much mercy with that one, but the pen was a great gift.
I enjoyed you poem as it is well written and has a lot to think about.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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I was dumb enough to ask God, "What am I to you?" After a couple of years it came back answered, "You are his eyes and ears." Not much mercy with that one, but the pen was a great gift.
I enjoyed you poem as it is well written and has a lot to think about.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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well the arms of Christ are the arms of his people...
Comment from Janet Foor
I enjoyed reading your thoughts as a sinner to our Savior. His love and mercy are certainly unfathomable. Great picture to enhance the message.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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I enjoyed reading your thoughts as a sinner to our Savior. His love and mercy are certainly unfathomable. Great picture to enhance the message.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Many thanks.
Comment from witness4HIM
This short poem tells a lot of mercy from our God.
It truly states the was to Christ and the Son of God.
Once a child of condemnation, now a child of God.
Mercy bought me and freed me from sin.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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This short poem tells a lot of mercy from our God.
It truly states the was to Christ and the Son of God.
Once a child of condemnation, now a child of God.
Mercy bought me and freed me from sin.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Excellent.
Comment from kra-z-ka-z
I enjoyed the praise of mercy. It was thoughtfully and nicely written. I had a bit of trouble with the title though. To A Son of God? How many do you feel he has?
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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I enjoyed the praise of mercy. It was thoughtfully and nicely written. I had a bit of trouble with the title though. To A Son of God? How many do you feel he has?
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Well I was deliberting, a son of God is a term used to denote a member of the angelic host as well as our original father, Adam the first man made in the image of God.
It could also refer to a male person born again of the spirit whereas if it were a female it would be a daughter of God...I think!
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Sounds good to me!
Comment from justatuna
Another great job. Again, your style is something I've not seen before. I can't find anything wrong. I really enjoy reading your work. Is this part of a larger work? I saw something about a book. Thanks.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Another great job. Again, your style is something I've not seen before. I can't find anything wrong. I really enjoy reading your work. Is this part of a larger work? I saw something about a book. Thanks.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2012
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Yes it is in a book that being the idea of the collection of poems...it is written in eight syllables per line with two quatrains and a unrhyming couplet to conclude.
Comment from c_lucas
There but for the Grace of God, go I, wallowing in self pity. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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There but for the Grace of God, go I, wallowing in self pity. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Many thanks Charlie. I cant but help sometimes pity myself for what I used to be but that makes the light even brighter, many thanks,
Bic.
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Thank you for your review and comments, BP. Charlie
Comment from Hitcher
God is love, to accept Him and embrace His teaching one will feel His power and know His mercy and darkness will be held at bay. I think that is what I got from your well crafted little offering friend, well done!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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God is love, to accept Him and embrace His teaching one will feel His power and know His mercy and darkness will be held at bay. I think that is what I got from your well crafted little offering friend, well done!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Thanks Hitcher.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes I liked this you described how you feel about Christ very well in both verses and finished the poem in a strong way well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Yes I liked this you described how you feel about Christ very well in both verses and finished the poem in a strong way well done regards Jill
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Many thanks...
Comment from donaldww
This poem is about mercy in him. Great assonance in this tongue twister: chose he, me to see. The poet has comfort, at last. Hurrah!
Thanks for sharing your poem, points and member dollars!
Cheers!
DW
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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This poem is about mercy in him. Great assonance in this tongue twister: chose he, me to see. The poet has comfort, at last. Hurrah!
Thanks for sharing your poem, points and member dollars!
Cheers!
DW
Comment Written 04-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2012
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Anytime DW.
