Comment from Zinnia48

Excellent

I really liked this--especially that last line. The first two lines tell the story we already know--because it's a very human story. The last line makes it your personal story. Thank you for your inspiration. Caroline (Babcia)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

So pleased you liked it, and thank you for your great review xx

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

The picture with the beating heart is great to go with your 5-7-5. Your choice of saying was great, since it is short and went well with the 5-7-5. I know the feeling, we can't help but forgive the ones that we love. Good luck :)

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thank you for your great review xx

Comment from mk

Excellent

you dirty dog...you forgave him again..ha..nice job. syllable count is perfect. the photo emphasizes the pain of the words and the meaning of the proverb..nice job

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thanks a lot, glad you enjoyed it xx

Comment from kra-z-ka-z

Excellent

Boy I sure know that rubber band! And how we always want to believe they will come to their senses. Alas, they can't, it's in their genes...The Y chromosome...Has us one our knees asking "Why! Why!"

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Yep, you are so right, thanks for the great stars xx

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

You have made good use of every syllable to convey a truth about human relationships: They are connected by love, pain, betrayal, and forgiveness.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thanks Janice, for your great comments xx

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

Excellent Poem! The poem flowed and connected well.
The artwork was great and enhanced the read. I liked the last line it was thought provoking! Thank you....

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thank you for your great review xx

Comment from mauial

Excellent

Nice piece and end rhyme throughout. To bad this proverb does not refer only to the pain one feels at the loss of death, but to other things like adultery etc.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Glad you enjoyed this little poem xx

Comment from Meta~Mark

Excellent

where there is love, there is pain..you let him back in with hesitation yet you still love even after betrayal..is my insight..

excellent!

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thank you so much for you great comments xx

Comment from Opal H.

Excellent

This haiku conveys the message very clearly. Proverb is pretty well known, which is good beacuse that's what's asked for. Very well written. Syllable count is perfect. Great work.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thank you for your great review, glad it worked for you xx

Comment from kosiyae

Excellent

wow ! sweet let try it here.

"SWEET MY LOVE
I LOVE YOU MY BABE
HONEY OF MY HEART"

WOW ! I HAVE MANAGED IT TODAY
THAT IS MY OWN,KEEP IT UP .

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2012

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2012

Thanks so much, and thank you for you poem back xx