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Comment from marilyo
Congratulations on a well deserved win! I enjoyed the graceful flow that your poem sustained from beginning to end. It lent an air of gentility which all the more emphasized your theme of innocence.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2012
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Congratulations on a well deserved win! I enjoyed the graceful flow that your poem sustained from beginning to end. It lent an air of gentility which all the more emphasized your theme of innocence.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much for such a gracious and kind review. I sincerely appreciate these thoughtful comments.
Comment from visionary1234
Well I can see why you won this contest my dear - congratulations! What a gorgeous little piece, with a perfect photo to illustrate your point. Well done!
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Well I can see why you won this contest my dear - congratulations! What a gorgeous little piece, with a perfect photo to illustrate your point. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Jul-2012
Comment from cabinwriter
This is a really beautiful ode to childhood. The rhyming and imagery was perfect. If I had a six left, I would surely bless this poem with it.
Thank you for sharing.
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This is a really beautiful ode to childhood. The rhyming and imagery was perfect. If I had a six left, I would surely bless this poem with it.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning this contest. This poem reminded me of walking with my granddaughter, oh, I see so many things that escaped me before. But, she is growing up as well....
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Congratulations in winning this contest. This poem reminded me of walking with my granddaughter, oh, I see so many things that escaped me before. But, she is growing up as well....
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Thank you so much amada. I'm delighted to bring you good memories. It is good to see through a child's eyes now and then, isn't it?
Comment from gazzagodbod
beautiful ode i especially love the last stanza the picture is perfect for the piece thanks my friend and good luck in the contest gazza
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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beautiful ode i especially love the last stanza the picture is perfect for the piece thanks my friend and good luck in the contest gazza
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Thank you gazza! I appreciate this kind review and good wishes.
Comment from irishauthorme
Ah, a lament for our lost-child view of the world, before we were forced to grow up. Some people resisted, and kept their dreams, although inside, hidden from the world. We dreaded being called "Childish," and yet, how were we to keep those dreams, that new discovery every day, maintain our fascination with an ever-changing world?
Very good work, I like this one!
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Ah, a lament for our lost-child view of the world, before we were forced to grow up. Some people resisted, and kept their dreams, although inside, hidden from the world. We dreaded being called "Childish," and yet, how were we to keep those dreams, that new discovery every day, maintain our fascination with an ever-changing world?
Very good work, I like this one!
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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I'm glad to know you liked this one, Irish. I agree, some people do manage to hang on to the child-eyes with which they view the world. It helps if you are a writer, to be able to do that, doesn't it?
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This has charming details of the delight a child finds in the world around her. It is sad that life often takes a child's innocence away. The poem is well written, with good rhymes and rhythm.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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This has charming details of the delight a child finds in the world around her. It is sad that life often takes a child's innocence away. The poem is well written, with good rhymes and rhythm.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Thank you kind Jeanie. Your review meant so much to me.
Comment from Alaskastory
'Ode To Innocence' is a winning ode worth a million stars. It is a precious poem, one every grandparent who is lucky to read it will absolute love it. Your unique powers of observation make me know how very much I've forgotten of the wonders all around us.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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'Ode To Innocence' is a winning ode worth a million stars. It is a precious poem, one every grandparent who is lucky to read it will absolute love it. Your unique powers of observation make me know how very much I've forgotten of the wonders all around us.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2012
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Thank you for saying such nice things about my Ode to Innocence. I'm so glad to know you found it worthwhile. Hugs to you, kind MissA. :p
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful ode to innocence that hasn't been lost and pleasure in simple treasures. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
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this is very well written, mystery writer, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful ode to innocence that hasn't been lost and pleasure in simple treasures. i wish you the best of luck in the contest
Comment Written 18-Jul-2012
Comment from MAMONIA
I adore what you have written here in this
lovely poem. It is also a reminder and a
message to all of us to return to the youth
we once knew.
How does life get distorted so quickly. I
love the rhythm, the rhyme, the flow and
imagery in this poem.
It is totally delightful.
My best to you. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2012
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I adore what you have written here in this
lovely poem. It is also a reminder and a
message to all of us to return to the youth
we once knew.
How does life get distorted so quickly. I
love the rhythm, the rhyme, the flow and
imagery in this poem.
It is totally delightful.
My best to you. Good luck.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2012
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Thank you SO much for this most encouraging review. I loved what you said about returning to the youth we once knew. I'm really pleased that you enjoyed the poem.
