Pennie less
This poem is about a woman addicted to shopping2 total reviews
Comment from nhinchliff
You've written a well structured Haiku. It has the right amount of syllables and is very appropriate to the title. It is quite humorous and makes a lot of sense, considering how locked into credit cards our society is. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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You've written a well structured Haiku. It has the right amount of syllables and is very appropriate to the title. It is quite humorous and makes a lot of sense, considering how locked into credit cards our society is. Good job.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2012
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Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!
Comment from eastneuker
This is an excellent haiku (despite the fact that you've spelt platinum incorrectly. Oops!) It is quite poignant and a cry for help. It says a lot in a few succinct words. Well done and good luck for the contest.
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This is an excellent haiku (despite the fact that you've spelt platinum incorrectly. Oops!) It is quite poignant and a cry for help. It says a lot in a few succinct words. Well done and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jul-2012
