Along the Jericho Road
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Comment from judiverse
Sorry I can't award another "six" at this time. The interview procedure sounded really convincing. There seems to be a bit of a contradiction as Debra's killer was supposedly methodical and neat, whereas Chet is unwashed and talkative. I like the Sheriff's handling of the situation with Jana who wants to be in on the interview. Jana is thought to be the best one to handle Debra's niece, Darcy. Your description of Darcy is great. Loved the comment about Justice is a process, not an outcome. Chet responds as if he is the murderer, and Sheriff wonders if he's got a serial killer on this hands. Really holds the reader's attention. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Sorry I can't award another "six" at this time. The interview procedure sounded really convincing. There seems to be a bit of a contradiction as Debra's killer was supposedly methodical and neat, whereas Chet is unwashed and talkative. I like the Sheriff's handling of the situation with Jana who wants to be in on the interview. Jana is thought to be the best one to handle Debra's niece, Darcy. Your description of Darcy is great. Loved the comment about Justice is a process, not an outcome. Chet responds as if he is the murderer, and Sheriff wonders if he's got a serial killer on this hands. Really holds the reader's attention. judi
Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Hi, Judi. Thanks for this wonderful review. I'm glad you found the interview process 'convincing'. That really tickles me! And I very much appreciate your virtual six, my friend. You are very kind. Warmest regards, Bev
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You're so welcome. My pleasure. judi
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Comment from c_lucas
It's been a while, but the wait has been worth it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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It's been a while, but the wait has been worth it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2012
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Thanks so much, charlie. I really appreciate the great review and your sharp eye for the SPAG. Warm regards, Bev
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You're welcome, Bev. Charlie
