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Comment from vivicadad
Good one. That is not a good place to get stuck in. Your imagination of Hell (Hilton), that is a pretty ambitious taking of it. Lots more people will love to go there then.
Enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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Good one. That is not a good place to get stuck in. Your imagination of Hell (Hilton), that is a pretty ambitious taking of it. Lots more people will love to go there then.
Enjoyed it.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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Sorry,
It was not finished
but inadvertedly released.
I cut and pasted it for you.
Thanks.
ricky1024.
"The Inferno Hell"
The thick elevator cable snapped
and I did what I was able, PLUNGE!!!
yes I did die that day and I landed
in a hell of a not to sweet SMELL!
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In hell #One or "Inferno Hell," I had
done it this time, Valentine.
There was no light, there was no music,
no birds did sing, there was nothingness
no church bell down here did, or for a
matter of fact, RING!!!
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This was not the "Hilton" with two
thousand plus rooms, just a place filled
with GLOOM!!!
Yes, my friends i had done it this time
this was the end.
the end of the line, or as I thought for
even in this dank, dark, hole I found
something much, much, much, more worse!
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There was this little known door, a trap
door located in the dust at the very bottom.
At the very bottom this door or, as I had
learned, was a secret to become burned forever
into my mind, my heart, and m soul.
For in this room of acrid smell Me, myself,
and I had found the ticket straight... to...
HELL!!!
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"The Black Rope Crushing Hell."
This "HELL" was a heart-breaker.
A straight to the Mental-depression hospital
heart-taker.
Yes the "Grim Reaper of Death" almost took
away my virtual very last BREATH!!!
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My son with a 7 year olds given name of Jason
made a single mis-step.
A single poor judgement thought, idea, error
which was to become a families TERROR!!!
Life as destiny for some reason turns out to
be not PRETTY!!!
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At 18 he was to become a brain dead vegetable.
No more four year 9 old smile.
no more 17 year old partner at work.
All because of this 17 year old JERK!!!
A car out of control locked in third gear.
It's kinda queer according to Ford for a Mustang,
souped up for racing, would hit that curb and
like a un-guided missle attain height, power,
and impact crushing a tin-can.
A tin-that was a metal vehicle glass-crash
racconed soon, por left over, my only begotten
son that I named 18 previous years ago from a movie
character hero "Jason and the Argonaunts."
Rest in piece my love for through my mind, through
my love, this world will know and never forget my
"Argonaunt"
Author Notes
Life as is destiny is unapproachable, precious,
and so dear that it is and will always be temporary.
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Wow. Its even worst than i had anticipated. It is hard to hear stories like this, but still important to tell. Excellent and courageous. Well done
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Thank You vivicadad,
I just want to help.
Ricky1024
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No fun,
gotta Run,
Thanks,
Ricky1024
Comment from Ekim777
I suppose the smell of death and decay is as horrendous as witnessing death inflicted on the living. Your image of hell seems to be a barren empty place with empty silent buildings But what of infinity. Dostoevsky says infinity might be a ray of light crossing the dust air of an empty room. The worst aspect to our poet is that Hell is empty of humanity. Sartre said Hell is other people! Imagine being cooped up in a room, without escape, and condemned to spend eternity with two other people. Milton had the best definition of Hell. "The mind is its own place. You can make a hell out of heaven and a heaven out of hell." To finish on another point. Why are people more preoccupied with hell than with heaven? Just a thought. -Ekim777
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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I suppose the smell of death and decay is as horrendous as witnessing death inflicted on the living. Your image of hell seems to be a barren empty place with empty silent buildings But what of infinity. Dostoevsky says infinity might be a ray of light crossing the dust air of an empty room. The worst aspect to our poet is that Hell is empty of humanity. Sartre said Hell is other people! Imagine being cooped up in a room, without escape, and condemned to spend eternity with two other people. Milton had the best definition of Hell. "The mind is its own place. You can make a hell out of heaven and a heaven out of hell." To finish on another point. Why are people more preoccupied with hell than with heaven? Just a thought. -Ekim777
Comment Written 01-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2012
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Sir, We make our own hell or heaven.
Quote "Hell on Earth."
But, when we pass and return back through
the "Veil"we will wait for perhaps an eternity
for yet another chance at this thing that we have
learned to be life.
Thanks,
Ricky1024 {Richard}
"Father Time."
