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A New Day

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Comment from Linda Wilson
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I really liked this poem and how it flowed. The promise of a new day and all it can bring. All the opportunities to grow in one day I found inspiring, as the words flowed from morning to evening and back.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you so much. I am glad you enjoyed it!!! Debbie
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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A day begun happily has a great chance of being good throughout. Your well-written, uplifting poem encourages the reader to embrace life. Good

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you so much!!! Debbie
Comment from visionary1234
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Well I thoroughly enjoyed being reminded to live and appreciate THIS day, each one being a chance to make a new "beginning". Lovely!

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you so much!!! Debbie
Comment from purrfect tale
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I like the sentiment here of not taking anything for granted. And beginning that thought with the start of a new day worked well. Good rhyme and meter.

 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    Thank you so much!!! Debbie
Comment from JW
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This is a nice poem and it is quite well written. However, I do find reading about the start of a new day quite ironic when I am lying on my bed, tablet in hand, and about to call it a night. :-) JW

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 Comment Written 29-Jun-2012

reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
    I hope tomorrows day is a good one for you!!! Debbie