Psalms for the Journey
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Psalm of Separation"Talking to God over life's journey
22 total reviews
Comment from Bindu Saxena
beautiful words. God is great we all know.I enjoyed whatever you had to say during the moments you were stuck up in traffic. all teh best.keep writing.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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beautiful words. God is great we all know.I enjoyed whatever you had to say during the moments you were stuck up in traffic. all teh best.keep writing.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2012
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2012
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thank you so much; love, jan
Comment from artemis53
we will always fall. It is in our nature and are still special in God's heat. i always pray to increase my faith to instill more hope!
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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we will always fall. It is in our nature and are still special in God's heat. i always pray to increase my faith to instill more hope!
Comment Written 30-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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absolutely, artemis53 - love, jan
Comment from guinea
Very good write. And very inspirational. I enjoyed every word. The words flow with love and reverence to our creator. The imagery is great. Shows deep thinking.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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Very good write. And very inspirational. I enjoyed every word. The words flow with love and reverence to our creator. The imagery is great. Shows deep thinking.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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thanks, guinea -- I would be nothing without the Creator. love, jan
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh I liked this poem very much it reads so very well and there is so much feeling through the work it reads strongly and sincerly well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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Oh I liked this poem very much it reads so very well and there is so much feeling through the work it reads strongly and sincerly well done regards Jill
Comment Written 30-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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thanks, Jill -- love, jan
Comment from yonashalom
This is an excellent poem. I love the style of this. Sounds like a Psalm too. It's so cool how there is that one word centered message. He is faithful. Thanks for sharing. ~Yona
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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This is an excellent poem. I love the style of this. Sounds like a Psalm too. It's so cool how there is that one word centered message. He is faithful. Thanks for sharing. ~Yona
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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Yona, thanks for your comments. Yes, He is always faithful. love, jan
Comment from BadEducation
A comfort poem. A dichotomy poem. I want one but not the other it works well. I believe in god and eveil, I am a crusader for good. It was my pleasure reading it.
As is reviewing it too.
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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A comfort poem. A dichotomy poem. I want one but not the other it works well. I believe in god and eveil, I am a crusader for good. It was my pleasure reading it.
As is reviewing it too.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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thanks, again, BadEducation. love, jan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
When someone gets saved, he/she must be nurtured in the faith, for sanctification does not come by accident or just because time passes. We fail; therefore, we must pray. Good
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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When someone gets saved, he/she must be nurtured in the faith, for sanctification does not come by accident or just because time passes. We fail; therefore, we must pray. Good
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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absolutely, Janice. thanks for reading. love, jan
Comment from dmt1967
I like this poem it is very well written and I can so relate to this poem I feel so like that lol the picture is very good as well thank you
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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I like this poem it is very well written and I can so relate to this poem I feel so like that lol the picture is very good as well thank you
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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thank you, again, dmt1967 -- love, jan
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Your faith and your ability to cope with your challenges is penned well in this poem.
Gives the reader a chance to ponder over your message.
Well penned and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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Your faith and your ability to cope with your challenges is penned well in this poem.
Gives the reader a chance to ponder over your message.
Well penned and thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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thank you, Maureen - love, jan
Comment from mumsyone
Hi Jan,
Another beautiful poem that many of us can relate to, especially those who know that the closer we get to God, the more Satan works to keep us away. Thanks for sharing.
Love and hugs,
Lois
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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Hi Jan,
Another beautiful poem that many of us can relate to, especially those who know that the closer we get to God, the more Satan works to keep us away. Thanks for sharing.
Love and hugs,
Lois
Comment Written 29-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2012
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you are so right, Lois -- thanks for reading. love, jan
