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Triskaidekaphobia

Fear of # 13 Acrostic

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Comment from donkeyoatey
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This cracks me up..13 just happens to be my favorite number, and because ofthis odd affliction..I NEVER have to fight for it! LOL..the color scheme of this is perfect, as is the artwork, and you have made the design a work of art too! Well done! Donkeyoatey

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
    Hi Donkeyoatey,I should have know 13 would be YOUR favorite number! LOL I'm glad I cracked you up with this poem. It's always fun to have a good laugh. I did a more decorative job of this for FA, but I don't know if I'll post it . I'm glad you liked this My Friend! Thanks for the Wonderful review! :o) Helvi
Comment from Capricorn30
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I like your poem--a lot;it has an eerie feeling(which I enjoy--I enjoy "dark" themes)so your poem was exactly what I was seeking;a great acrostic;cleverly written;lots of wording all about the dreaded #13--the black background was an excellent choice;haunting and the orange lettering give it a good Halloween effect!I have read that no plane has ever crashed on a Fridaythe13th--I suppose it's possible:)

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2012

Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Nancy my dear friend
This is uniquely you. No one but you could come up with that title. It is clever and for those who believe in mumbo jumbo it could be scary. I still get nervous on Friday the Th though. A good day to stay in bed
Bear

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2012

Comment from Jane Johnson
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Nicely written. Words flowed well. Nice imagery and artwork chosen. Easy to read and understand. Good rhyme. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2012

Comment from NaughtieScribe
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lol way to kewl. You actually made Heebie-Jeebie work. Way too funny with a bit of a sinister undertone. I'm glad I could provide you with a little kick in the muse. Hugs

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2012
    Thanks for stopping by Naughtie! I appreciate your little kick to my muse. I had a LOT of fun writng this. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the wonderful review and inspiration! :o) Helvi
Comment from sunnilicious
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Triskaidekaphobia by Helvi2

This is quite an original word to pick for an Acrostic Poem. Well thought out and written. Scary story with matching colors. Good work.

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2012

Comment from Meta~Mark
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acrostic about Triskaidekaphobia..wow..if this isn't a tongue twister I don't know what is..way to go dark here with the number 13 and all the metaphors..

way to go!!!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2012

Comment from Jewell McChesney
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What a fun piece of creative writing, here! You have such a great mind. I must admit the title messed with me. Haha. I'd never heard of that.
I'm not superstitious, as you can probably guess. Haha I do know July has a Friday the 13th coming up and I'm sure those with this disease, will be a nervous wreck.
You rock my friend!

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2012

Comment from Permelia
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How in the world do you even remember how to spell the word like Triskaidekaphobia anyway? I never even heard of it before and now I read a good poem about it?

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
    Hi Permelia, Naughtie Scribe organized a fictioanl contest on triskaidekaphobia and it was the inspiration for ny acrostic. I didn't know how to spell it before,but now I've spelt it so many times I don't think I'll forget! LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it My Friend! Thanks for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi
Comment from ennahanid
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How very clever this is your Triskaidekaphobia - Acrostic Poetry Contest contest entry. You had a lot of fun I'm thinking with this one and it shows. I wish you luck in the contest - Dinah

 Comment Written 17-Jun-2012


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2012
    Hi Dinah, I did have fun writing this! This is actually the 3rd version I wrote. While I was posting it, it became the 4rth version, because I was still changing the words within it. I wonder if I started this on the 13th? LOL I have no idea when I wrote the first version. I'm glad I finally got it posted! Thanks for the wonderful review and Good Luck wishes! :o) Helvi