Poetry, Dreams In Motion.
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Gift from God"A collection of poetry.
6 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
This is quite a nice sentimental poem about the love of a mother for her child. I feel that it might have been better without the capital letters at the start of each line as it seems to stop it from flowing smoothly.
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This is quite a nice sentimental poem about the love of a mother for her child. I feel that it might have been better without the capital letters at the start of each line as it seems to stop it from flowing smoothly.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2005
Comment from EmileJP
I think that you love children ( God bless you for it), The continuance of one's beliefs, culture and dreams remains steadfastly anchored with our children....no wonder we love them so. Very nice poem that flows well and carries a feel good message. Thanks.
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I think that you love children ( God bless you for it), The continuance of one's beliefs, culture and dreams remains steadfastly anchored with our children....no wonder we love them so. Very nice poem that flows well and carries a feel good message. Thanks.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2005
Comment from Nescher Pyscher
A very warm, sweet, maternal kind od piece. A good read, but you've done demonstratively better. I dunno, maybe your skill has grown since then?
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A very warm, sweet, maternal kind od piece. A good read, but you've done demonstratively better. I dunno, maybe your skill has grown since then?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2005
Comment from Rebeckah
Don't change a thing, this is absolutely beautiful I love it. You can really see the love that you have for your child. Please let me know if you have any others I would love to read them. Keep up the good work.
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Don't change a thing, this is absolutely beautiful I love it. You can really see the love that you have for your child. Please let me know if you have any others I would love to read them. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2005
Comment from memnochangelno!
I enjoyed this poem {4 and a half} but I felt that it lost its rythym
in certain parts the ending is sweet but could be sweeter
Keep writing its a lovely poem
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I enjoyed this poem {4 and a half} but I felt that it lost its rythym
in certain parts the ending is sweet but could be sweeter
Keep writing its a lovely poem
Comment Written 24-Feb-2005
Comment from stilllooking4u
I like it very much it brings with it all the joys and heart ache the they bring with themselves.Great job on the writing!
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I like it very much it brings with it all the joys and heart ache the they bring with themselves.Great job on the writing!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2005
