Gray
26 total reviews
Comment from forestport12
Another descriptive shor and powerful story. You and Spiritual Echo have a way to bring depth and soul into your writing which is easier said than done. Stan
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Another descriptive shor and powerful story. You and Spiritual Echo have a way to bring depth and soul into your writing which is easier said than done. Stan
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hi Stan! Thanks! You do it well yourself! I am sorry to not be able to keep up with your work too. I am lucky to be able to post what I do. I will try to do better. I am due to have shots for my back and I hope that'll help! Thank you again Stan!! Susan
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
Hi Susan I have returned after publishing my book. I'm not leaving. I enjoyed your little story and it was a very heart warming story. Mary
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hi Susan I have returned after publishing my book. I'm not leaving. I enjoyed your little story and it was a very heart warming story. Mary
Comment Written 09-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hi again Mary! Thank you so much! I'm always delighted when you enjoy these!! Stay well and let me know about your book!?? LOVE< Susan
Comment from LancsLass
Ah, life and love is complicated, isn't it? This is a nicely framed moment, a point of change where the way forward is clear, even welcome, yet there is hesitation. No matter how inviting the road ahead is, it still may be filled with unseen boulders, and change is hard.
A poignant story. Thanks for a good read. Anna
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Ah, life and love is complicated, isn't it? This is a nicely framed moment, a point of change where the way forward is clear, even welcome, yet there is hesitation. No matter how inviting the road ahead is, it still may be filled with unseen boulders, and change is hard.
A poignant story. Thanks for a good read. Anna
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Oh yes...change is the hardest of all. What an insightful review Anna. I'm delighted as always, by your thoughtful words. Thank you so very much! I hope you and your family will have a wonderful weekend! :) Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, susan, you did a great job writing this flash fiction about the man who buried a wife that was dissatisfied with her life and even though their marriage was dysfunctional he missed her.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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this is very well written, susan, you did a great job writing this flash fiction about the man who buried a wife that was dissatisfied with her life and even though their marriage was dysfunctional he missed her.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Oh Dear Friends! Please forgive me? I must paste, copy? I'm so far behind. I did read ALL these fine reviews and appreciate them more than words can say. HUGS and a thousand thank you's!! xoxo. Susan
Comment from Sally Carter
I enjoyed this one, Susan, though I confess it didn't grab me quite as much as other stories you have posted in recent weeks. That's not to say it's not good, but you have set the bar so high, you have given yourself a hard act to follow!
The grayness is cleverly woven through the story, both in colour and mood, and specially appreciated the thought that the man had been invisible in the marriage.
And I am sure the mix of emotions is probably representative - relief mingled with fear of being alone.
Perhaps this sounded such a complex relationship that it was hard to capture in so few words.
However, you got me reading it four or five times, so clearly it made an impression on me.
Always a pleasure to read your offerings.
My best to you,
Sally
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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I enjoyed this one, Susan, though I confess it didn't grab me quite as much as other stories you have posted in recent weeks. That's not to say it's not good, but you have set the bar so high, you have given yourself a hard act to follow!
The grayness is cleverly woven through the story, both in colour and mood, and specially appreciated the thought that the man had been invisible in the marriage.
And I am sure the mix of emotions is probably representative - relief mingled with fear of being alone.
Perhaps this sounded such a complex relationship that it was hard to capture in so few words.
However, you got me reading it four or five times, so clearly it made an impression on me.
Always a pleasure to read your offerings.
My best to you,
Sally
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Hi Sally! you are so good to me. This was just a sort of metaphor?? for my own misery. I don't know. I have wasted too many years ,and now health trouble will steal the rest. I do thank you for each and every one of your notes...I couldn't be luckier than to have you as a friend. xoxo. Susan
Comment from Carrie Smith
Suse, the gray area in any relationship is always there. Seems the one in this story brought a feeling of too little to late. Yet, at the same time, I still had the feeling the man wasn't really there, as he said his last goodbye, and walked away with the breeze of freedom. Well done, but pretty depressing write here, my friend...hug, Susan
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Suse, the gray area in any relationship is always there. Seems the one in this story brought a feeling of too little to late. Yet, at the same time, I still had the feeling the man wasn't really there, as he said his last goodbye, and walked away with the breeze of freedom. Well done, but pretty depressing write here, my friend...hug, Susan
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Hi Susan! How are you?? I'm having a time of it. Same old same old. I'm honored by your wonderful review! How nice. You know me, old sadsack. I wonder if I'll ever be happy. Doubt it. But thanks for this and I'm going to pm or write you as soon as I can. LOVE, Susan
Love ya girl, write or call when you feel like it, LOL...Susan ps. may not have been with you as much as I should have been and I'm sorry...xx
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Susan, it's okay.. I am so down, not much matters right now. Please take care of yourself. S.
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OKAY, SUSE! Let me know when you want to talk. I really miss you, girl!!! LOL...S.
sighing off, I am whipped...H
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Comment from pattipac
The dull grayness of your widower's life permeates throughout your story. I can't imagine how his depressive lifestyle could motivate him to continue in this loveless marriage for forty-five years? Liked how you relate that the grayness of her physical life will mingle with the soil turning it gray.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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The dull grayness of your widower's life permeates throughout your story. I can't imagine how his depressive lifestyle could motivate him to continue in this loveless marriage for forty-five years? Liked how you relate that the grayness of her physical life will mingle with the soil turning it gray.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Oh Dear Friends! Please forgive me? I must paste, copy? I'm so far behind. I did read ALL these fine reviews and appreciate them more than words can say. HUGS and a thousand thank you's!! xoxo. Susan
Comment from misscookie
You don't know how blessed you are untill your blessing are gopne.
this is a very meaningful short story.
I bet many can relate to.
yes life is to short so let everyday couynt.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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You don't know how blessed you are untill your blessing are gopne.
this is a very meaningful short story.
I bet many can relate to.
yes life is to short so let everyday couynt.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Oh Dear Friends! Please forgive me? I must paste, copy? I'm so far behind. I did read ALL these fine reviews and appreciate them more than words can say. HUGS and a thousand thank you's!! xoxo. Susan
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No problem, I understand it happens to us all, until next time.
Comment from Trybuck
Share a smile while there's time
Maybe even a laugh or two
A soft word, a loving look
A gentle touch would be good
They make the bad days easier to handle
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Share a smile while there's time
Maybe even a laugh or two
A soft word, a loving look
A gentle touch would be good
They make the bad days easier to handle
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Hi Buck! Thank you very much...I just love your reviews! Many times they are better than my stories! :) It's a joy to hear from you...Blessings...Susan
Comment from Gideon Roth
Wow, Susan. This was a heavy read that tugged at the heart but told a story so real and far too common. If I could have given a six star rating on this one, I would have. I look forward to your next submission...Tim
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Wow, Susan. This was a heavy read that tugged at the heart but told a story so real and far too common. If I could have given a six star rating on this one, I would have. I look forward to your next submission...Tim
Comment Written 07-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2012
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Hi Tim...I'm up late with back pain, just checking in...and I sure thank you for this kind note. Please forgive me for being behind for you...? I am so sorry. Susan
