My daughter
I love my daughter2 total reviews
Comment from faithin01
I think you are on the right track, you defintently have potential, but doing an in depth study on what it means to write a 5-7-5 poem, would benefit you greatly. By all means don't give up, just study a little more, you'll get it. keep writing.
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I think you are on the right track, you defintently have potential, but doing an in depth study on what it means to write a 5-7-5 poem, would benefit you greatly. By all means don't give up, just study a little more, you'll get it. keep writing.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2012
Comment from lnoreika
Nice! I can see you looking at your daughter as she sits in the sunshine, smiling as she turns her head to look at mama. Altruistic love is the only true love.
Great job! Perfect 5-7-5.
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Nice! I can see you looking at your daughter as she sits in the sunshine, smiling as she turns her head to look at mama. Altruistic love is the only true love.
Great job! Perfect 5-7-5.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2012
