In My Dream
A dream I had involving The Doors lead singer80 total reviews
Comment from angel123
I think your poem is well written and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your words. Your poem flows well and is very interesting. Thank you for providing your author notes.
Angel123
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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I think your poem is well written and meaningful. I enjoyed reading it and your artwork choice goes well with your words. Your poem flows well and is very interesting. Thank you for providing your author notes.
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Angel
Comment from WORDSOFTHEHEART
Great poem. It is so interesting that you were able to take a dream and weave it into a great poem so smoothly and vividly for the reader. Interesting concept too with a surprise within. Keep up the good writing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Great poem. It is so interesting that you were able to take a dream and weave it into a great poem so smoothly and vividly for the reader. Interesting concept too with a surprise within. Keep up the good writing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thanks words
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You are welcome.
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: ) Have a great day.
Share moment.... You are the second person that put "words" and I thought hummm do they mean they are just "words" not felt or meant.. (it was 3:00am) then it hit me MY LOGIN NAME..WORDSOFTHEHEART...LOL
I am setting an early curfew for me..no more 3:00am on Fanstory! ; )
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No I was just using a shortened verison of your screen name.
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I realized that and love it. Not until you were the second person did I go.. that is terrific.
Take care, Words :)
Comment from Munkysam
Whoa. I did not expect it to go in the direction that it went. I liked it though, its the kind of story I dig. Really interesting and out there. Your imagery was pretty cool, and I'm a bit of a Doors fan and it was cool that Jim was a bad guy. Nice write, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Whoa. I did not expect it to go in the direction that it went. I liked it though, its the kind of story I dig. Really interesting and out there. Your imagery was pretty cool, and I'm a bit of a Doors fan and it was cool that Jim was a bad guy. Nice write, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thanks sam
Comment from Maureen's Pen
History and nightmare all rolled into one:)
Your author notes helped me out a bit here with info I didn't know.
Otherwise a well penned work with strong imagery and great flow that pulls the reader along.
Sure glad it was you that had the nightmare....but at least a great poem came out of it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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History and nightmare all rolled into one:)
Your author notes helped me out a bit here with info I didn't know.
Otherwise a well penned work with strong imagery and great flow that pulls the reader along.
Sure glad it was you that had the nightmare....but at least a great poem came out of it.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Maureen
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Justin,
This is an imaginative poem and one I enjoyed reading from the first line to the last. You have chosen good words to express yourself, the flow is smooth and the theme is creative and evocative. Well done, chey
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hi Justin,
This is an imaginative poem and one I enjoyed reading from the first line to the last. You have chosen good words to express yourself, the flow is smooth and the theme is creative and evocative. Well done, chey
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Chey.
Comment from RaymondJohn
How does the narrator tell his story if he's been eaten up? Funny and scary. I didn't know about the Whisky-go-go. Spritely poem. I enjoyed it very much. Ray.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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How does the narrator tell his story if he's been eaten up? Funny and scary. I didn't know about the Whisky-go-go. Spritely poem. I enjoyed it very much. Ray.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Ray. I don't know but I suppose he's a ghost now reflecting on how he died.
Comment from DALLAS01
Interesting mixture here of creativity and s little piece of history. This was filled with vivid imagery and imagination. Liked the choice of red background. A piece of the Doors music might enhance this even more.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Interesting mixture here of creativity and s little piece of history. This was filled with vivid imagery and imagination. Liked the choice of red background. A piece of the Doors music might enhance this even more.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Dallas.
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you're welcome
Comment from Connie P
An amazing story in a poem. Probably a good thing that you explained Morrison's self-given nickname, many may not remember that. I'm not sure your form is all it could be, it's a great, Tolkienesque tale.
Connie
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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An amazing story in a poem. Probably a good thing that you explained Morrison's self-given nickname, many may not remember that. I'm not sure your form is all it could be, it's a great, Tolkienesque tale.
Connie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Connie.
Comment from daymanrayne
That was very wicked and I like it a lot. I thought it was very honest and I was hoping you had it in the end that you turned into the lizard. That would have been cool
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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That was very wicked and I like it a lot. I thought it was very honest and I was hoping you had it in the end that you turned into the lizard. That would have been cool
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you very much for your kind review rayne.
Comment from cherylmelwoods
Hi Justin,
What a wonderful write full of lovely poetic devices to enhance your brilliant poem.
Great alliteration throughout:
(Sadistic sting)
(repugnant reptiles)
Alliteration really lifts your poem intensifying the imagery.
This was a terrific read with vivid imagery created by your pen and artwork..
Wonderful, incredible dream!
Regards, Cheryl :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Hi Justin,
What a wonderful write full of lovely poetic devices to enhance your brilliant poem.
Great alliteration throughout:
(Sadistic sting)
(repugnant reptiles)
Alliteration really lifts your poem intensifying the imagery.
This was a terrific read with vivid imagery created by your pen and artwork..
Wonderful, incredible dream!
Regards, Cheryl :-)
Comment Written 08-Jun-2012
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2012
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Thank you Cheryl.
