More than dreams
Self doubting all our capabilities and dreams2 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Well done syllable count is spot on you have managed to create a short syllable counted work that is thought provoking regards Jill
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Well done syllable count is spot on you have managed to create a short syllable counted work that is thought provoking regards Jill
Comment Written 31-May-2012
Comment from adewpearl
Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good consonance of D sounds in midst of doubt
and of soft S sounds in soul foresees
good alliteration in keep calm
A most thoughtful expression of emotion, too
Brooke :-)
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Your poem is in excellent 5/7/5 format
good consonance of D sounds in midst of doubt
and of soft S sounds in soul foresees
good alliteration in keep calm
A most thoughtful expression of emotion, too
Brooke :-)
Comment Written 31-May-2012
