Summer
Doesn't this bring back memories?12 total reviews
Comment from Cobalt Blue
You have entered this in the 575 contest which means it must be judged on the requirements of a 575 which are mainly that the 1st line has 5 syllables, the 2nd has seven and the 3rd, five. Obviously you are way off. Back to the drawing board!
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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You have entered this in the 575 contest which means it must be judged on the requirements of a 575 which are mainly that the 1st line has 5 syllables, the 2nd has seven and the 3rd, five. Obviously you are way off. Back to the drawing board!
Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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I thought that it was 5-7-5 or else I wouldn't have written it.
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What you have is a 685.
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I think I fixed it. Not sure.
Comment from MizKat
MandyLina - This is a very nice poem about summer.
I enjoyed it very much and found it to be really interesting and well written. Kat
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reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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MandyLina - This is a very nice poem about summer.
I enjoyed it very much and found it to be really interesting and well written. Kat
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Comment Written 25-May-2012
reply by the author on 25-May-2012
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Thanks!
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Its nice to hear you say so.
