Love
A heart-breaking haiku3 total reviews
Comment from Munkysam
The pain really comes out of these few words. I think the colors are really well chosen for this poem too. I like that you capitalized "MY" to really enhance the power of the statement. Nice work here, sad, but good. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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The pain really comes out of these few words. I think the colors are really well chosen for this poem too. I like that you capitalized "MY" to really enhance the power of the statement. Nice work here, sad, but good. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks!!
Comment from harmony13
I liked this poem. I especially liked the last line
because what it means can go two ways for me! It flowed
well and the colors you used helped enhance the read!
harmony13
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I liked this poem. I especially liked the last line
because what it means can go two ways for me! It flowed
well and the colors you used helped enhance the read!
harmony13
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks!!
Comment from snowflakes77
I really like this 5-7-5 Haiku. It has a lot of promise. It left me wanting more also. It's written very well with nice alliteration and word usage. My favorite line is, "Gone forever, without me." :) Randa
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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I really like this 5-7-5 Haiku. It has a lot of promise. It left me wanting more also. It's written very well with nice alliteration and word usage. My favorite line is, "Gone forever, without me." :) Randa
Comment Written 21-May-2012
reply by the author on 22-May-2012
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Thanks!!
