Comment from Glasstruth

Exceptional

Wow! This is a painting done with words, and it reads so heavenly in the way you presented it. If it was just thrown to the right it would change the beauty of the meaning. You've provided your own picture. Superb! Les

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

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reply by the author on 22-May-2012

Hi Les, How can one NOT be happy when a review starts with WOW! Thank you SO much for the lovely review! I am extremely honored by your six star rating! :o) Helvi

Comment from Leeza Maisyan

Excellent

I thought this was very clever and creative! I would like to try this style of poetry some day. good job! :]

God bless.

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from Razz

Excellent

so very beautiful.
So wonderfully unique.
So soft and has such flow.
Wonderful.

Must take a bit of patience and focus.

Great writing.
Have a wonderful day.

Razz

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I decided to read this poem because it looked interesting!
I must say I liked it! It flowed and connected well.
I liked the form of this poem.......harmony13

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from squid152

Excellent

I can definitely see the mustached birds in your poem! Very creative! You have enchanted my eye and made me realize that there is more than just words to poetry.-Squid

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

..*Their*............................*.........*.......
..........................*feathered*...............................................
........................*....curves...*................*..Are.*.....................
.......................*...and...*.....*............*beautiful*.................
.........*..........*mustache*.........*......*...*..when...*...............
...........*...*.bows..*..................*...........*...seen....*.........

I highlighted to copy "feathered curves and mustache bows" to say how much I love that line, and now I see the invisible formatting. Yes, this DID take some work! If I hadn't used up my sixes too soon, I'd give you one for sure. Beautiful... in EVERY way! :)

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

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reply by the author on 21-May-2012

Bless you Phyllis, I appreciate your cyber six just as well my Friend! I could never do this in Evil Eddies realm, I have to do it in microsoft word fiirst! I see you have discoverd my secrect in formatting. Things tend to shift so I experiment a lot before I give it to Evil Ed our trouble making editior. I'm thrilled you enjoyed this. THanks SO much for the wonderful review! :o) Helvi

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

I have not been treated to one of your shaped poems in a while - you know how charming I find them :-)
I also love the strong rhymes
and pretty descriptive detail
lovely consonance of hard C sounds in cobalt sky and assonance in rule the blue and alliteration in beauty that's beyond.
You're left me smiling :-) Brooke

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

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reply by the author on 22-May-2012

Hi Brooke, Leaving people smiling is one of my favorite things to do! :o) THank you SO much My Friend for a truly lovely review. YOU left ME smiling BIG TIME! :o) Helvi

Comment from Adam J Santos

Excellent

Helvi2, This is way cool. I enjoyed the poem alot just by itself. It must have taken alot of time to create those shapes in the form of wings in flight. Well done on this. It makes me want to try one... Take care Adam:)

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Great poem, idea, and design. I don't know if I would have the patience to do one like that on this site, with Evil Eddie always on the prowl. I do shaped poems otherwise, just none on here. Good job.

 Comment Written 21-May-2012

Comment from WilliamDeen

Excellent

Your Shape Poem, Gliding Wings, is really neat. It is in the shape of Bird wings and the poem is about Birds and their wings! Wonderfully smooth cadence too!

 Comment Written 21-May-2012