Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi Helvi2,

This a beautiful shape poem, a form I have not ever had the nerve to try. You have done a fine job with this one. Your word choices are well thought out and lovely. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

Visually stunning, and the poem is, too. I really enjoyed your creativity in creating the wings. The imagery was outstanding, too. Great job. Ray.

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Helvi2, this is magnificent. Girl you have more patience and creativity than I could ever hope to have. Stunning visual poem. Thoroughly enjoyed this work... jlsavell

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from Jim Lorson Sr

Exceptional

Helvi, this is an exceptional piece of poetry. I really like this designer form you have chosen.

The message creates such great imagery of birds in flight. Truly amazing how these flights take place.

Well done,,,,,,,Jim

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

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reply by the author on 22-May-2012

Hi Jim, Thank you SO much for the extraordianry rating! Im thrilled you and others have enjoyed this SO much! Bless you for the lovely review! :o) Helvi

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

This is very well written it is beautiful reads very well a lot of went into this it shows through in the quality of the work well done regards Fuller Jill

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from RalphNater

Excellent

This is a really beautiful poem and I love the form of the shape poem. I really like your word choices, keeping it concise yet elegant. Thanks

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from Kelleigh

Excellent

What a beautifully shaped poem that works so perfectly with the words. A verycreative way to incorporate your subject with a visual. I agree, I wish they wouldn't insert a picture, but it doesn't take away from your piece in any way that you added one. Cheers!!

~Kelleigh

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Exceptional

Very impressive presentation. Your own design with the words added to make a shape poem. It sounds a bit challenging for me, but you have done a great job. Enjoyable!!! Debbie

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

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reply by the author on 22-May-2012

Hi Debbie, It is challenging, but the end results are worth it! Thank you SO much for parting with one of of your sixes to rate this poem. I an truly honored!!! Hugs and Smiles, Helvi

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is a very well written shape form making for an enchanting read. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good job.

 Comment Written 22-May-2012

Comment from strandregs

Excellent

wonderful Idea and execution you certainly still have the knick knack and your choice of words is a winner too
as well as the rhyming rhymes.Z.

 Comment Written 22-May-2012