Comment from joann r romei

Exceptional

well as a man and human being, this is exactly the way you should feel,at any time and any for reason, if more men expressed themselves better, there would be less divorce , good luck, i really enjoyed this

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 23-May-2012

Thank you very much for your comments and rating, glad you enjoyed it.

Comment from Crackerberries

Needs Improvement

Although this is a wonderful poem it does not conform to the rules in the 5-7-5 contest.
A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.

If you could update it to the description above I would be happy to change my review... Also some font and background color would be super duper.

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 18-May-2012

Thank you for your input,can you explain about the structure

reply by Crackerberries on 18-May-2012

You have nine lines and you should have three...your first line has 19 syllables and should have 5.

A 5-7-5 follows the structure of a Haiku. It has three lines. The first line has 5 syllables. The second line has 7 syllables. The third line has 5 syllables again.

Comment from Kavya Ram

Average

I like this poem. Sometimes we might feel too down and may cry without reason. There is a good emotional content in this poem and it has really moved me.

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 18-May-2012

Thank you for your coment