Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

or what maybe (may be) left of it.

I, like my mom's side of the family(,) also have had lots of adult Diabetes related

Very insightful piece of writing. Yes, one does have to wonder about the condition of their body and if abusing it in their youth had any affect.

Good write.

Anisa

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 18-May-2012

Thanks for the review

Comment from originalgentleman

Average

I think what I mostly liked about this peice was the personal touch you gave. Using what seemed to be your lifes experiences.By doing this, I feel that it serves as an outlet for you.

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 18-May-2012

Thank you for the review

Comment from BrookeClara

Excellent

I like this. Where are you going with i? is it part of the larger body of a book or essay?

This is a wonderful affirming line: I also share the belief that our spirits are housed in these temporary vessels we call bodies and will transition to other state of "being" one day.

I'm new to the site so don't know if this is an ongoing work of yours. If so go with the flow, it's good stuff. Brooke

 Comment Written 18-May-2012

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reply by the author on 18-May-2012

Thank you for the positive and encouraging review.