I Pledge
Every day I live, to me, is a wondrous thing,116 total reviews
Comment from moosegal
You are a happy, grateful person and it shows in your writing! I especially liked the sense of wonder in "tiny me living in such grandeur and wealth". Very sweet!
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You are a happy, grateful person and it shows in your writing! I especially liked the sense of wonder in "tiny me living in such grandeur and wealth". Very sweet!
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from babyross
micro hearts and veins, muscles and complex eyes.There are numorous delightful descriptions here that brings this piece to life. I enjoyed the personal reading, just as much as reading it. This was well rated. Thanks for sharing.
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micro hearts and veins, muscles and complex eyes.There are numorous delightful descriptions here that brings this piece to life. I enjoyed the personal reading, just as much as reading it. This was well rated. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Essence16
Another great Scottish poem for you! This was very inspirational and had a lot of depth and meaning to it. I agree with the general idea of the poem and like the artwork chosen. Good work!!
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Another great Scottish poem for you! This was very inspirational and had a lot of depth and meaning to it. I agree with the general idea of the poem and like the artwork chosen. Good work!!
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Lynn Gamache
I really liked your fourth stanza and would encourage you to work on the rest of your poem til it flows as well as this verse. Lots of potential here but it might take some time to distill your thoughts into a more pleasant read.
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I really liked your fourth stanza and would encourage you to work on the rest of your poem til it flows as well as this verse. Lots of potential here but it might take some time to distill your thoughts into a more pleasant read.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Kaine Darcwater
This is a very well-written poem. The way you speak of being one with all that is living. Being at one with even the smallest of life-forms. It's truer than you realize. We are one with all because our creator has made it so. Every creature on Earth has a purpose in life. It is quite amazing when you think about it. Good work. ;)
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This is a very well-written poem. The way you speak of being one with all that is living. Being at one with even the smallest of life-forms. It's truer than you realize. We are one with all because our creator has made it so. Every creature on Earth has a purpose in life. It is quite amazing when you think about it. Good work. ;)
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Wendystreet
I happen to enjoy the vernacular. It was particularly enjoyable when read aloud on the recording. I also really enjoyed the artwork. I must say, however, after reading your feelings about being critiqued in the past, I feel a wee bit uneasy about offerring any criticism that might be helpful. So, I will stay on the positive, which is I gave it five stars. I like this poem as well as the poems of Robert Burns: )
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I happen to enjoy the vernacular. It was particularly enjoyable when read aloud on the recording. I also really enjoyed the artwork. I must say, however, after reading your feelings about being critiqued in the past, I feel a wee bit uneasy about offerring any criticism that might be helpful. So, I will stay on the positive, which is I gave it five stars. I like this poem as well as the poems of Robert Burns: )
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Flamingbush
I appreciate the rich, vibrant nature of this poetry with all its depth of language (as a linguist and German major in college, I love all the ins and outs of languages). Micro hearts and veins, complex eyes, drinking in strength by osmosis are wonderful word pictures of the message aptly conveyed.
Thanks for the author notes to aid in understanding the passage, though they didn't really explain that last paragraph. I do get the message though.
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I appreciate the rich, vibrant nature of this poetry with all its depth of language (as a linguist and German major in college, I love all the ins and outs of languages). Micro hearts and veins, complex eyes, drinking in strength by osmosis are wonderful word pictures of the message aptly conveyed.
Thanks for the author notes to aid in understanding the passage, though they didn't really explain that last paragraph. I do get the message though.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from gazzagodbod
Have missed reading your work auld yin this is fabulous i love the picture and your presentation is great thank you my friend gazzagodbod
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Have missed reading your work auld yin this is fabulous i love the picture and your presentation is great thank you my friend gazzagodbod
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from keimosobie
you certainly put a lot of work into this havent you? very well done and I liked the vioce over and the way you read it helped with the flow of it. well done
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you certainly put a lot of work into this havent you? very well done and I liked the vioce over and the way you read it helped with the flow of it. well done
Comment Written 10-May-2012
Comment from Doshi123
I pledge
The poem by alexgardiner titled 'I pledge' full of jubilant, reverberating musical notations, taking us all with a positive approach to live ahead.He imbibes inspirational mirth from the birds and bees, a marvelous Wordsworthian adoration for Nature. Any depressed soul would soon Be drawn towards the consoling and chirping sounds of birds heard
Poetically in this poem in which the writer lives every moment of life.He is with the micro flies, his concern for the flying, his absorption Of colours on this earth -all expressed in his inimitable style .
His question of concern for this awesome nature springs forth Myriad ponder able worthy questions:
What can I give to this Nature's way?
How can I add to this awesome worth?
The poet with a worldview of humanity observes let us obey
Nature's Law, harming none, essential need of the hour for all of us. A delectable read of philosophy, observation with A message in which beauty and Life's truth explicated.
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I pledge
The poem by alexgardiner titled 'I pledge' full of jubilant, reverberating musical notations, taking us all with a positive approach to live ahead.He imbibes inspirational mirth from the birds and bees, a marvelous Wordsworthian adoration for Nature. Any depressed soul would soon Be drawn towards the consoling and chirping sounds of birds heard
Poetically in this poem in which the writer lives every moment of life.He is with the micro flies, his concern for the flying, his absorption Of colours on this earth -all expressed in his inimitable style .
His question of concern for this awesome nature springs forth Myriad ponder able worthy questions:
What can I give to this Nature's way?
How can I add to this awesome worth?
The poet with a worldview of humanity observes let us obey
Nature's Law, harming none, essential need of the hour for all of us. A delectable read of philosophy, observation with A message in which beauty and Life's truth explicated.
Comment Written 10-May-2012
