Dear God, Please Help
Letter to God21 total reviews
Comment from poetstar
Oh what a beautiful and thoughtful piece of writing. I adore it, and it was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes. I have such compassion for your husband's suffering and loss of his precious brother. I am glad he did tell his brother about Jesus numerous times. That way his brother could call on Jesus in his last breath. They say there are no non believers when death comes near. No matter how stubborn a person may have been in life, when it is coming to an end, people always cry out to God, even if it is just said in their mind and nobody else hears or knows. I came to review you because you were so kind to review the poem about my mother, and I appreciate you. I am sure glad I visited your site, because I was so blessed by your fine spiritual writing. God, was generous when he gave you talent. By the way, I am a Texas girl too. I live in San Antonio. Once I wrote a poem about our beauteous river walk here. If you ever have time, you might come and see the picture and poem of the river on my site. The poem is called San Antonio's Enchantress. Another poem I wrote is about Cesar Chavez streets here in San Antone. Next I am writing about Morgan's Wonderland here in San Antonio. Did you know that this precious Wonderland is an amusement park that his rides for disabled children. Like their is a merry go round and other rides that kids in wheelchairs can enjoy. It is so unique a place and the only place in the world where rides are geared to the needs of special children. Well, I will close for now.
God bless you and hubby, and all of your family. Your Texas friend Vonnie
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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Oh what a beautiful and thoughtful piece of writing. I adore it, and it was so sweet it brought tears to my eyes. I have such compassion for your husband's suffering and loss of his precious brother. I am glad he did tell his brother about Jesus numerous times. That way his brother could call on Jesus in his last breath. They say there are no non believers when death comes near. No matter how stubborn a person may have been in life, when it is coming to an end, people always cry out to God, even if it is just said in their mind and nobody else hears or knows. I came to review you because you were so kind to review the poem about my mother, and I appreciate you. I am sure glad I visited your site, because I was so blessed by your fine spiritual writing. God, was generous when he gave you talent. By the way, I am a Texas girl too. I live in San Antonio. Once I wrote a poem about our beauteous river walk here. If you ever have time, you might come and see the picture and poem of the river on my site. The poem is called San Antonio's Enchantress. Another poem I wrote is about Cesar Chavez streets here in San Antone. Next I am writing about Morgan's Wonderland here in San Antonio. Did you know that this precious Wonderland is an amusement park that his rides for disabled children. Like their is a merry go round and other rides that kids in wheelchairs can enjoy. It is so unique a place and the only place in the world where rides are geared to the needs of special children. Well, I will close for now.
God bless you and hubby, and all of your family. Your Texas friend Vonnie
Comment Written 14-May-2012
reply by the author on 15-May-2012
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I love San Antonio. I will come and visit your site and read your other poems. Thank you so much for your comments and review. I am glad you came to visit. :o)
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I enjoyed the visit also. We really have a lot to be proud of here in Texas because Morgan's Wonderland is the only one of its kind anywhere. We were the first to come up with a park with rides that will allow children with special needs to ride and enjoy the amusement park, as well as all other children. Vonnie
Comment from purrfect tale
A lovely and simple prayer/letter to God. I've often wondered if we will keep our memories of loved ones who don't make it to heaven. Can you mourn such a loss in heaven?
He tried to bring him to You so many times(,)
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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A lovely and simple prayer/letter to God. I've often wondered if we will keep our memories of loved ones who don't make it to heaven. Can you mourn such a loss in heaven?
He tried to bring him to You so many times(,)
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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I, too, have wondered how all our tears can be wiped away if we remember the ones who are not with us. I guess God will take care of those hurts, too. Thank you so much for reviewing my letter.
Comment from Charlene0513
To justjo66,
This is an honest caption of just what happens when a tethered soul meets his demise before becoming a "child of the Most High." Families seem dysfunctional and lost for their loved one.
Charlene
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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To justjo66,
This is an honest caption of just what happens when a tethered soul meets his demise before becoming a "child of the Most High." Families seem dysfunctional and lost for their loved one.
Charlene
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Charlene, for your comments and review of my letter.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
This is very well written a plea from the heart with so much feeling displayed very well done and good luck in the contest regards Fuller
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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This is very well written a plea from the heart with so much feeling displayed very well done and good luck in the contest regards Fuller
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Fuller for your kind review and comments on my letter.
Comment from Galactia
Excellent written letter to God, may he grant all your wishes healing your husband. . Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Excellent written letter to God, may he grant all your wishes healing your husband. . Good luck in the contest.
Regards
Tia
Comment Written 06-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Tia for your comments and best wishes on my letter.
Comment from katmckeown
I give you 5 stars for writing from your heart. Know that I will agree with you in prayer. You appear to have meet you criteria so I will simple say. AMEN. Good luck.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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I give you 5 stars for writing from your heart. Know that I will agree with you in prayer. You appear to have meet you criteria so I will simple say. AMEN. Good luck.
Comment Written 05-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Kat for your kind comments and review of my letter.
Comment from MizKat
Losing a sibling can be a sad time, but not knowing if they'll meet in heaven again, makes it even worse. Hope they do. Kat
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Losing a sibling can be a sad time, but not knowing if they'll meet in heaven again, makes it even worse. Hope they do. Kat
Comment Written 05-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Kat for your sensitive review and comments.
Comment from mommerry
A letter asking for help for others and expressing faith have to be a pleasure for the Lord to receive. He will heal the broken heart and bring peace.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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A letter asking for help for others and expressing faith have to be a pleasure for the Lord to receive. He will heal the broken heart and bring peace.
Comment Written 05-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Mommerry. Peace is always what we seek. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from light
A well written and sincere, heart felt prayer. Your pain for your husband shows. As for his brother, ours is not to judge. I do know that God's mercy endures forever. May God give your husband peace.
Elaine
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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A well written and sincere, heart felt prayer. Your pain for your husband shows. As for his brother, ours is not to judge. I do know that God's mercy endures forever. May God give your husband peace.
Elaine
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Thank you Elaine for your blessings and comments on my letter.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
This is very touching and well written. Good idea for the contest. I hope it's not based in reality from your own life. Good entry.
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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This is very touching and well written. Good idea for the contest. I hope it's not based in reality from your own life. Good entry.
Comment Written 04-May-2012
reply by the author on 07-May-2012
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Yes, Phyllis it was a heartfelt and true letter. Thank you for your comments and kind review.
