My Day
My day of change2 total reviews
Comment from padhip
Good attempt,but the background color makes it difficult to go through the lines..An inclusion of an artwork could have made it look better..There are only four syllables in the third line though..But overall a good effort.
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Good attempt,but the background color makes it difficult to go through the lines..An inclusion of an artwork could have made it look better..There are only four syllables in the third line though..But overall a good effort.
Comment Written 01-May-2012
Comment from c_lucas
Right now you need to wish your poem was visible. I had to highlight to bring it up. Very well written with a smooth flow of words.
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Right now you need to wish your poem was visible. I had to highlight to bring it up. Very well written with a smooth flow of words.
Comment Written 01-May-2012
