Comment from katmckeown

Excellent

The skill alone should earn you an excellent each time. I congratulate you on accomplishing a difficult struture and creating a beautiful work of art.

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from chita

Exceptional

I must say that I am quite smittened with this form of poetry-you have composed an exceptional write and written with great emotion-I thoroughly enjoyed this write--well done.

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine.Glad you liked it so much and thanks for this great rating. Have not seen you for some time. Glad you are back.

Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

A superbly composed poem, Ine. Really, this form and your beautiful descriptions made for a truly delightful viewing. Well done! Bev

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

reply by Writingfundimension on 02-May-2012

You bet!

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Swimming freely in a sunlit sea scheme << wonderful alliteration.

Ine, this poem is fun to read aloud... it rolls off the tongue so freely... especially the line: Enchanting colors bedazzle blue-green ....it's almost musical!

Wonderful bit of whimsy in complicated form that I would NEVER get right...LOL! Good job! :)

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 02-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very colorful read.There is good imagery and descriptive scheme

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 01-May-2012

You're welcome. Ine. Charlie

Comment from Starlit Ink

Excellent

We all love the legend of the mermaid and it's a great subject for poetry. The imagery of color and water was very entertaining. It is a nice to read about fantasy to take one away even if for a moment. This also shows difficulty and adherence to form.

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes it was very difficult.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

This was such a beautiful terzanelle with a lovely rhyming scheme throughout. Very creative and whimsical, lovely use of imagery used. Thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from MumEsGirl

Excellent

This was a wonderful poem. I am intrigued by the continuation of the rhyme. Some times I find it difficult to get even one or two lines that match.

I love the descriptions of the mermaid and the sea, and the colour and art work are perfect
hugs
kate

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine

Comment from Cumbrianlass

Exceptional

I really love this poem, Ine. So full of colour and life. I think it deserves a six. I only have one comment. The jet stream is the wind above the earth. The Gulf Stream is the warm current in the ocean that circles the globe. You might want to change that.

Otherwise, a beautiful poem. Well done.

Av

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Thanks for the tip, will change.

Comment from Dutchie

Excellent

Ah Ine so wonderful this poem in a very unusual format.
Seems rather complicated to me. You painted wonderful pictures in my mind. You created a serene and tender atmosphere.
Such a pleasure to read. Liefs Fia

 Comment Written 01-May-2012

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reply by the author on 01-May-2012

Thanks for your generous review. Have a lovely day and take care, Ine. Yes it was. Just check Chris' comment.