Mermaid queen
A Terzanelle, see foot note50 total reviews
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
Awesome ability to use the Terzanelle form of poetry. Your rhyming patterns are flowing so well and the details and word choices you use continuously fit the theme of your topic. A great read!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Awesome ability to use the Terzanelle form of poetry. Your rhyming patterns are flowing so well and the details and word choices you use continuously fit the theme of your topic. A great read!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from karenina
Loved the poem
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The background color is ex a copy what I w a Mr to paint my bedroom
(I digress)
The rules for the darn form have caused my brain to implode....
All of that and the summation is it was a superior read with some semi Einstein like rhyme scheme e me I could never a accomplish and survive!
Cherries to you!
Well done!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Loved the poem
.
The background color is ex a copy what I w a Mr to paint my bedroom
(I digress)
The rules for the darn form have caused my brain to implode....
All of that and the summation is it was a superior read with some semi Einstein like rhyme scheme e me I could never a accomplish and survive!
Cherries to you!
Well done!
Karenina
Comment Written 31-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
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Yikes! What happened to that effort at typing!
Sorry!
Karenina
Comment from Ronni
Beautiful and brilliant poem, there has always been a dreamy kind of mystery
mermaids and their mysterious sea/ocean life and world. You have
made this one so very enchanting and enticing to dwell on. Gorgeous
picture for theme and flow.
Thanks for sharing...best wishes, Ronni
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Beautiful and brilliant poem, there has always been a dreamy kind of mystery
mermaids and their mysterious sea/ocean life and world. You have
made this one so very enchanting and enticing to dwell on. Gorgeous
picture for theme and flow.
Thanks for sharing...best wishes, Ronni
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from meeshu
superior work in a fairly difficult form. "teaming" with great rhymes.
love the feel of the ocean it coaxes. I don't want to come up for air.
thanx, robina......meeshu
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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superior work in a fairly difficult form. "teaming" with great rhymes.
love the feel of the ocean it coaxes. I don't want to come up for air.
thanx, robina......meeshu
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is very well written and describes a beautiful scene and emotion. I felt at peace as I read this poem. You did a good job writing it. I'm sorry I missed it the first time around.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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This poem is very well written and describes a beautiful scene and emotion. I felt at peace as I read this poem. You did a good job writing it. I'm sorry I missed it the first time around.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from Cindy Warren
That does sound like a sweet dream. I can easily imagine living that way, without any trouble. I'm not really familiar with this form of poetry, but I found it an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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That does sound like a sweet dream. I can easily imagine living that way, without any trouble. I'm not really familiar with this form of poetry, but I found it an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week.
Comment from William Ross
very good on this, and congratulations on the win with this hard style to write. It's just wonderfully written. thanks for sharing this again. have a wonderful day.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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very good on this, and congratulations on the win with this hard style to write. It's just wonderfully written. thanks for sharing this again. have a wonderful day.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good start of the week. Thanks for the lovely six, much appreciated.
Comment from royowen
Well done, what a super poem, with a very interesting rhyme scheme, and a mixture and textured narrative. Beautifully written, the interwoven story gives it an unusual "feel" to it. Well done, I see you wrote this sometime ago, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Well done, what a super poem, with a very interesting rhyme scheme, and a mixture and textured narrative. Beautifully written, the interwoven story gives it an unusual "feel" to it. Well done, I see you wrote this sometime ago, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2018
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Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good and blessed Eastern Weekend.
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You too Ine,
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You too Ine,
Comment from Hawaiian Mermaid
Aloha from Hawaii Robina 1978,
What a beautiful poem, you write about my lovely ocean so very well. I'm new to this style but I like it. Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Aloha from Hawaii Robina 1978,
What a beautiful poem, you write about my lovely ocean so very well. I'm new to this style but I like it. Have a great day.
Aloha, Ginger
Hawaiian Mermaid
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Comment Written 08-Apr-2015
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2015
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Thanks for your kind review, Have a great second part of the week. I have not seen you for a long time. are you OK?
Comment from dragonpoet
NIce poem about the life of a mermaid and the beauty of the sea above and below.
It seems like a hard form to write.
In your description of the rhyme scheme shouldn't it be ABA not ABC. It seems like you used only 2 rhymes not differnt ones as the rhyme scheme suggests.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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NIce poem about the life of a mermaid and the beauty of the sea above and below.
It seems like a hard form to write.
In your description of the rhyme scheme shouldn't it be ABA not ABC. It seems like you used only 2 rhymes not differnt ones as the rhyme scheme suggests.
Good luck in the contest and keep writing
Happy Holidays.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 18-Dec-2014
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2014
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Thanks for your review. Have a nice weekend, Ine. I see what you mean.
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You're welcome.
dragonpoet
