Giant
Your as giant as your heart2 total reviews
Comment from abbasjoy
I never feel I can do justice to short pomes like this, but after reading this one I must say, this really gets to the heart of the matter in short order. The only criticism I have is that the first word should be "You're" instead of "Your." In just a few words you describe this person so well.Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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I never feel I can do justice to short pomes like this, but after reading this one I must say, this really gets to the heart of the matter in short order. The only criticism I have is that the first word should be "You're" instead of "Your." In just a few words you describe this person so well.Good job.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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thank you for the feed back and your right
it should be you're not your im just really bad at grammar and spelling but im working on that
Comment from Modee
So much said in so few words. That's what these 5.7.5 poems are. very nice. I'm sure someone has already mentioned that it would be 'you're'...not your. Very nice. :)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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So much said in so few words. That's what these 5.7.5 poems are. very nice. I'm sure someone has already mentioned that it would be 'you're'...not your. Very nice. :)
Comment Written 29-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2012
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thank you for the feed back it made me fell a little more confident i wasn't really sure if i did a good job this was my first time writing this kind of poem.
