Rest
Now I lay me down to sleep26 total reviews
Comment from Dutchie
This is a heartfelt poem Susan to vent you heart...
Very emotional and well expressed. Oh my dear I'm so sorry you have to go through such hard times now. You made me aware how grateful we've to be when we are in good health and can live a common life. I'll pray for you my dear, and don't let that terrible monkeys win.... Hugs Fia
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
This is a heartfelt poem Susan to vent you heart...
Very emotional and well expressed. Oh my dear I'm so sorry you have to go through such hard times now. You made me aware how grateful we've to be when we are in good health and can live a common life. I'll pray for you my dear, and don't let that terrible monkeys win.... Hugs Fia
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2012
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Hi there! And the beat goes on. It never ends. Without good health, well. We all know what that means. Please take care Fia...hugs and many thanks! Susan
Comment from Trybuck
Hi Susan, Sometimes we just have to persevere, be still and know that He is God. What the enemy means for harm, God means for good. He has a way of turning the bleakest situation around when we give it all to Him.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
Hi Susan, Sometimes we just have to persevere, be still and know that He is God. What the enemy means for harm, God means for good. He has a way of turning the bleakest situation around when we give it all to Him.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Thank you from a tired old soul my friend. I hope you are right. I will try not to doubt. Thanks again Buck...for everything. Susan
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Wow! This is a powerful piece of sadness and despair!
I'm a nobody though, and it does not matter what I need. << This line say so much about his/her lack of self-esteem.
The tormenting monkeys are a great metaphor, frightening and strange. This person may well need a psychologist to help with such severe problems. Well written, so it's obvious to me that the author is far from a nobody. There is real talent here. :)
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
Wow! This is a powerful piece of sadness and despair!
I'm a nobody though, and it does not matter what I need. << This line say so much about his/her lack of self-esteem.
The tormenting monkeys are a great metaphor, frightening and strange. This person may well need a psychologist to help with such severe problems. Well written, so it's obvious to me that the author is far from a nobody. There is real talent here. :)
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Phyllis! Thank you very much. This person is me. Sadly. Just trying to survive a certain gang of people who think they have the right to ruin my life. I am tired too. It's mind boggling how cruel and dishonest certain types are. I really appreciate this enthusiastic note too...! Choose your battles wisely. hugs, Susan
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is vey well written, susan, you did a great job writing this heartfelt and emotional vent about the things you are suffering through. don't let them win....
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
this is vey well written, susan, you did a great job writing this heartfelt and emotional vent about the things you are suffering through. don't let them win....
Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Pam! Thank you so much! I'm still trying...but it's really wearing me down. And they know it too. This will last for some years. Such fun. Hugs Sweet!! Susan
Comment from misscookie
girl you are about to make me lose my mind and forget about my church up brining.'
I said a prayer then counted to ten after I read this down and ouit story.
I realze this is a way to vent. but girlfriend you got to snap out of it .
don't let those monkeys win. when all is said and done
I think this is a very deep story for me to read.
I thank you for sharing I think?
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
girl you are about to make me lose my mind and forget about my church up brining.'
I said a prayer then counted to ten after I read this down and ouit story.
I realze this is a way to vent. but girlfriend you got to snap out of it .
don't let those monkeys win. when all is said and done
I think this is a very deep story for me to read.
I thank you for sharing I think?
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi Cookie! I am trying. Love you for understanding too. I posted one just now for you! Hope you like it...Thank you so much my friend...xoxo. Susan
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Stay strong my friend. whaty is the name of the one you posted for me?
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:) It's called The Church Ladies, my attempt at humor and dialogue! :) Hugs! Susan
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I love it, thank you very much my children loved it also.
Comment from c_lucas
The electronic age is not meant to please the poverty level individual. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
The electronic age is not meant to please the poverty level individual. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
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Comment Written 21-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2012
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Hi again! I know, we can't please everyone that's for sure. I try tho, and it is havoc on my nerves. Thank you for another great note...I hope you are well! :) Susan
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You're welcome, Susan. Just work on pleasing yourself. Charlie
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Oh C, the few times I do that I have heck to pay...if you only knew! lol...I promise to try tho. I will. Susan