Comment from Allison78

Excellent

This is a great poem you've written, made me smile! Fun, cute and creative. Well written and a pleasure to read, great job!

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012

Thanks Allison.

Comment from Galactia

Excellent

great little zombie haiku. I thought it was really creative and loved your last line.

No Peristalses. which should be (No peristalsis)

great job

regards
Tiia

GL

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012

Thanks. Made the change and gave you props.

Comment from Anisa-

Excellent

Lol! This is fantastic. I love Zombies :) In fact, they are one of my favourite things to read about. This was a quirky little write, syllable count is good.

Great job.

Anisa

 Comment Written 05-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 05-Apr-2012

Thanks Anisa.