Comment from dezyne1966

Excellent

I am trying to fully understand what the message is,
I think you was saying that your muse brightens your life,
that things are dismal sometimes until your inspired by your muse? I enjoyed reading your poem, it is a good piece.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012

Umm, kind of. It was meant to be a bit cryptic :)
I have now put a note in my author's notes:
My muse is deep inside me. A little part of the divine, still in touch with the greater whole. A part of the spark that is my lifeforce.
Thank you for your kind and helpful review :)

Comment from penship

Exceptional

Hi- a good read, and just a coupla minor notes. I like the depths, and the sense that you are referring to darker realities.thanks

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and generous rating! I am glad you liked the depth of this. Thanks again :)

Comment from richardheaton

Average

This poem can probably be made a little less wordy, however this poem is great once you take out that factor and deserves to be recognized.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2012

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2012

Yes, I think you are probably right! These writing prompts are really hard because you have so little time to write, review and edit. I often take a look at a poem a couple of days after I have written with a fresh perspective but with only a couple of hours to write, that is not possible.
Thanks for your helpful review :)