Splitting Hairs
anyone you know?77 total reviews
Comment from words
Brilliantly done.
I have met many "Fawns" both male and female in my day.
They do always leave you feeling played. LOL
I've often used my interactions with them to strengthen my own "no" muscle ... they are worthy opponents in that contest.
Loved it.
Hugs, d
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Brilliantly done.
I have met many "Fawns" both male and female in my day.
They do always leave you feeling played. LOL
I've often used my interactions with them to strengthen my own "no" muscle ... they are worthy opponents in that contest.
Loved it.
Hugs, d
Comment Written 27-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2013
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Hey, thanks, D. I am considering another short Salon Verve mystery. They've been pretty well received. I appreciate the great review, my friend.
Hugs, Bev
Comment from Joan E.
"Werecats" eh--very clever! Your "matador" and "saucer of...cream" similes, along with your "chewing gum" metaphors are quite engaging. I bet you've collected volumes of fascinating tales like this one--as they say "only your hairdresser knows for sure!" -Joan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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"Werecats" eh--very clever! Your "matador" and "saucer of...cream" similes, along with your "chewing gum" metaphors are quite engaging. I bet you've collected volumes of fascinating tales like this one--as they say "only your hairdresser knows for sure!" -Joan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2012
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Hi, Joan. You are most kind to review my short piece. Thanks for taking the time and for your generous review. I really appreciate the support! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from LAFraser
Hahaha This is a great write, Bev! Yep, I know a few of these little beahtches! ;D
Pampered little brats who think the world owes them. :D Well done, honey! I hope this is fiction...
~Lisa xox
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2012
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Hahaha This is a great write, Bev! Yep, I know a few of these little beahtches! ;D
Pampered little brats who think the world owes them. :D Well done, honey! I hope this is fiction...
~Lisa xox
Comment Written 08-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2012
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Hiya, Lisa. Glad you enjoyed my beauty parlor story - which, yes, is fiction. And I love your comments and support, too. Hugs, Bev
P.S. I believe you have a posting that I have yet to read - hope to do that today! Xxx
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It is a great story, Bev! :D So glad it is fiction. With my temper, I'd be tempted to spank that little asskmenomorequestions, behind the parlor. ;D You're welcome, honey. I hope you'll like it, when you have time. It will go at the end of one of my other stories, eventually.
Big hugs, sweetie.
~Lisa xox
Comment from acvguard11
great job..i really enjoyed reading this and truly believe this piece deserves the recognized ribbon and all time best award that it has received...be proud :)...don't let others discourage you especially if you love to write..great job and keep writing!!!
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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great job..i really enjoyed reading this and truly believe this piece deserves the recognized ribbon and all time best award that it has received...be proud :)...don't let others discourage you especially if you love to write..great job and keep writing!!!
Comment Written 07-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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Thank you so much for your encouragement, acvguard. I am honored by your support and generosity! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from dezyne1966
Your story was very refreshing. Just a day at the
hair salon. your characters was totally believable.
I wouldn't change a thing about your story.
God Bless
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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Your story was very refreshing. Just a day at the
hair salon. your characters was totally believable.
I wouldn't change a thing about your story.
God Bless
Comment Written 07-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2012
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Thanks much, dezyne. I really appreciate your generous review and encouragement. East blessings, Bev
Comment from Bill Schott
A nice little 'slice of life' vignette in the salon. Great dialog and imaging of Fawn. The quick glimpse also of the busy situation in the beauty parlor. Well done.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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A nice little 'slice of life' vignette in the salon. Great dialog and imaging of Fawn. The quick glimpse also of the busy situation in the beauty parlor. Well done.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Bill, for your generous and encouraging review. I really appreciate the support! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Cindy Warren
Who doesn't know somebody just like Fawn? They play on sympathies and go from one relationship to the next, but nobody puts up with them for long. I love the humourous way you captured the essence of this pain-in-the-ass person.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Who doesn't know somebody just like Fawn? They play on sympathies and go from one relationship to the next, but nobody puts up with them for long. I love the humourous way you captured the essence of this pain-in-the-ass person.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thank you, Cindy, for your generous and encouraging review. I appreciate the interest and support. Bev
Comment from patsolstad
YOu've done an excellent job on this story. It held my interest throughout. I must say, too, that I found no typos or grammatical errors. Excellent work...
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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YOu've done an excellent job on this story. It held my interest throughout. I must say, too, that I found no typos or grammatical errors. Excellent work...
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thanks so much, patsolstad. I really appreciate your generous review and encouraging words! Warm regards, Bev
Comment from Dustybones
Nice twist at the end, fits tight with the curling iron and getting burt. But hey as if I know a woman's world. From a guys point of view Nikki loved that fiver and she got noive in spades for bitchin' about it as much as we bitch about them too. LOL....I bet you never knew you have the FAN ingrained into you hair style. Good story, for a girly girl. I lived to review. Very tight and very natural, please, next!
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Nice twist at the end, fits tight with the curling iron and getting burt. But hey as if I know a woman's world. From a guys point of view Nikki loved that fiver and she got noive in spades for bitchin' about it as much as we bitch about them too. LOL....I bet you never knew you have the FAN ingrained into you hair style. Good story, for a girly girl. I lived to review. Very tight and very natural, please, next!
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Thanks for the great review, Dustybones. I really appreciate you reading my story and sending along your interesting viewpoint! Cheers, Bev
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Can I ask do you like this style of review? Those fat heads think I am too nice.
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I appreciated how you told me what you liked about the piece and your insights into how it came across to you. As far as I'm concerned that's a good review! Hope that helps. Bev
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Thank you. Have an egg on me.
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That sounds good!
Comment from bowls
What a delightful story! It was refreshingly different from most of the fare I've read today and was true-to-life as well. Don't we all have a Fawn in our lives? You've drawn these characters exceptionally well. Thanks for a really entertaining read.
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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What a delightful story! It was refreshingly different from most of the fare I've read today and was true-to-life as well. Don't we all have a Fawn in our lives? You've drawn these characters exceptionally well. Thanks for a really entertaining read.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 06-Apr-2012
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Hi, bowls. What a wonderfully encouraging review! I so appreciate your support and encouragement. Warm regards, Bev
