Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

what lifelong affects childhood trauma costs - effects
all of which sexually abused - all of whom were sexually abused
You describe your tragic family dynamics effectively
led to my parent's separation - parents' - plural possessive
You tell the horrific stories of abuse in your family in graphic and heartbreaking detail
My oldest sister, the best adjusted, surrounded
add the second comma
evil eddie has ruined naive for you
A most inspiring and insightful conclusion :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 20-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012

Thanks, Brooke. I've made the corrections and as always appreciate your fine editing skills.

reply by adewpearl on 20-Mar-2012

You're most welcome :-)