Mother
Lies mothers tell3 total reviews
Comment from bkbehera
Cookies and other junk food are not good for children's health and most of the mother does not like to encourage children to take these junks, too much. The writer has nicely narrated this common happening in a amazing manner. It is absolutely enjoyable.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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Cookies and other junk food are not good for children's health and most of the mother does not like to encourage children to take these junks, too much. The writer has nicely narrated this common happening in a amazing manner. It is absolutely enjoyable.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Dutchie
In the past they often told white lies, to scare you, to have control. In your case it didn't work.LOL. Nice 5-7-5 poem with right syllable count.Well done. Fia
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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In the past they often told white lies, to scare you, to have control. In your case it didn't work.LOL. Nice 5-7-5 poem with right syllable count.Well done. Fia
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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Thank you very much
Comment from Chris Tee
I like this
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count.................Spot-on
Flow of piece..................Superb
Artwork..........................Sadly none
Rhyming.........................N/A
Content ..........................Sanity prevailing
Presentation stanzas........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....Found none
Final synopsis................Sane and serene
Total.................................10/10
Result computed..............Give this five stars
Computed Comments......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done just add the artwork to make this very competitive.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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I like this
Now to the serious stuff the review
Please be aware that this is a rating, generated from the darn info, pumped into this computer and not yours.
Syllable count.................Spot-on
Flow of piece..................Superb
Artwork..........................Sadly none
Rhyming.........................N/A
Content ..........................Sanity prevailing
Presentation stanzas........Regular
Alliteration/ assonance....Found none
Final synopsis................Sane and serene
Total.................................10/10
Result computed..............Give this five stars
Computed Comments......This is an excellent poem
Reviewers comments:
Well done here my dear fellow poet, the result is rather splendid and extremely pleasing if I may say so, old sport.
Well done just add the artwork to make this very competitive.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012
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This is the kind of feedback I appreciate the most, I get the idea on what to work on. Am new on this site, but i will get to learning how to add some artwork. Thank you
