Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "part one, Chapter 18"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from mreith80
What a wonderful story, I truly believe that this is such a great concept and so unique. Congratulations on your work I am sure you will be very successful in the future of your work :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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What a wonderful story, I truly believe that this is such a great concept and so unique. Congratulations on your work I am sure you will be very successful in the future of your work :)
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from The Stranger
well Barbara, I find myself with de-ja vous, I have said over and over just how excellent this story of spouse abuse is, and so it continues to be
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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well Barbara, I find myself with de-ja vous, I have said over and over just how excellent this story of spouse abuse is, and so it continues to be
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Chris Tee
Wow Barbara this is absolutely breathtaking work you produced in this posting ma'am. Well done with another splendid pert here old sport.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Wow Barbara this is absolutely breathtaking work you produced in this posting ma'am. Well done with another splendid pert here old sport.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janie King
You can't leave me here for a whole week...surely you're not going to let him kill her...I hate this waiting game..even if it is fiction...I'm just not good at ti. God bless.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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You can't leave me here for a whole week...surely you're not going to let him kill her...I hate this waiting game..even if it is fiction...I'm just not good at ti. God bless.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rightforyou
Hello Barbara
I enjoyed reading this chapter as it flowed smooth and was full of action...I cant imagine having too kick start a motorcycle and thought that was very well penned onto this story.as well as the ongoing drama with Anna...Well Done..>Ron
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Hello Barbara
I enjoyed reading this chapter as it flowed smooth and was full of action...I cant imagine having too kick start a motorcycle and thought that was very well penned onto this story.as well as the ongoing drama with Anna...Well Done..>Ron
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from gramalot8
Barbara, so this is where we get to start holding our breath and hoping for the best turn-out, right? Another chapter to keep us intriqued.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Barbara, so this is where we get to start holding our breath and hoping for the best turn-out, right? Another chapter to keep us intriqued.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dave M
Barbara,
It looks like the cops are finally interested, now that it might be too late for Anna. Of course, Bobby and his friends are cooked, but how much damage in the meantime?
I enjoyed this chapter and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Barbara,
It looks like the cops are finally interested, now that it might be too late for Anna. Of course, Bobby and his friends are cooked, but how much damage in the meantime?
I enjoyed this chapter and found nothing to criticize.
Dave
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from RazberryBullet
Got a chuckle here: Troy climbed on his Harley Davidson and repeatedly attempted to kick start it. It always starts on the first kick, unless I'm in a hurry. The engine roared. "Finally!" ;p
Incredible tension throughout!
Excellent as always :)
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Got a chuckle here: Troy climbed on his Harley Davidson and repeatedly attempted to kick start it. It always starts on the first kick, unless I'm in a hurry. The engine roared. "Finally!" ;p
Incredible tension throughout!
Excellent as always :)
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Allison78
This chapter left me wanting more and more! This is a short piece but it still contained a lot of suspense and drama. Great job!
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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This chapter left me wanting more and more! This is a short piece but it still contained a lot of suspense and drama. Great job!
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and encouraging words.
Comment from Belinda
Hi, Barbara, an exciting chapter with so many happenings. Only you know what's happening to Anna inside her apartment...:) Let me just wait for your further post to fulfil my curiosity. Thanks for sharing your wonderful storytelling skill.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Hi, Barbara, an exciting chapter with so many happenings. Only you know what's happening to Anna inside her apartment...:) Let me just wait for your further post to fulfil my curiosity. Thanks for sharing your wonderful storytelling skill.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the kind review.
