Comment from barkingdog

Excellent

Ironic piece this one.
Nice alliteration: greedy glitter gal
Clever thought, Shari.
You found the perfect picture as well.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2012

Thanks, Ellen. Just read Spiritual Echo's mind blowing essay on Child Abuse. So nice to find diamonds among the coals. LOL

reply by barkingdog on 20-Mar-2012

I like her writing very much. I'll go check it out. Not much action tonight, so I'm reviewing.

Comment from Adam J Santos

Excellent

Shari, Yet another clever Senryu. I don't think handcuffs are ever worn in a sense of fashion. Well done on this one as well. Take care Adam:)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012

Thanks, Adam. They do make bracelets that look like handcuffs, I'm sure -for the Gothic look.

Comment from TammyGail

Excellent

Lolol..That's what happens when you steal, you get to wear the ugly jewelry :) great witty little jot girlie..Cracked a smile while reading, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012

Thanks, Tammy. Always like to make a gal smile.

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

Hi Shari,

This is a good one. The greedy gal (love your alliteration) ends up wearing steel 'jewelry.' I guess she got hers!

Hugs,
Lou

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012

Thanks Lou. Maybe I had Lindsay Lohan in mind. LOL

Comment from Tonulak

Excellent

Not nessessarily...if they were set in platinum, they would look quite nice:)

This is a nice senryu, it's a send up of greed and justice. Pink handcuffs? Where can I get some?
Lots of fun--the senryu, Silly:)

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2012

Thanks, sweet sax player. Imagine the pain if they made handcuffs out of uncut diamonds. Ouch!

Comment from Cindy Warren

Excellent

Those bracelets aren't very attractive. Guess that's what she gets for stealng the good stuff. You're right, crime doesn't pay.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thanks for reading, Cindy. Not only are they unattractive, they hurt.

Comment from joann r romei

Excellent

This is genius, so simple but said so much about the superficial girl and at the end doesn't go with steel, that she would still be thinking of her jewelry in jail!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thanks, joann. This was a fun write.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

HI dear friend.

This is clever and original. Well phrased with fine alliteration on G and consonance of S and C-sounds.
Pitch perfect picture, too.



Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thanks, my warm sister. Hugs, Shari

Comment from Gungalo

Excellent

A good 5/7/5 write and bad for the perpetrator. Hehe. Certainly get you to thinking doesn't it. Awesome write Spitfire. You should have entered it in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

Thanks, Gungalo. Those contests are such a gamble. I stick to the freebie.

reply by Gungalo on 18-Mar-2012

I don't blame you girl.

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

greedy glitter gal
steals diamond necklace and ring
bad match for steel cuffs <<< I was totally unprepared for this line, even with the photo. EXCELLENT bit of writing here!

Bravo, I say. Have not even one teensy crit!

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 18-Mar-2012

That's good to hear, Phyllis. Thanks for taking time to review.