Comment from heyjude

Good

Teri, I may be mistaken. Maybe I looked at this wrong.
I think you are only supposed to have nine lines and
you have two lines that have six syllables. Time to take
a nap and silky fur on both cats. If you change it, let
me know or if I'm wrong.

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2012

Thanks. Teri

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Teri Cute nonet
well done and I like the comparison between the happy cat and the one that pouts

smiles
Take care.
Gert

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2012

Thank you Gert. Hugs, Teri

reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Mar-2012

Smiles
Gert

Comment from mgarreau

Excellent

Great job on the Nonet! I always enjoy a poem about animals:) I like how your first two lines rhyme. Good choice of picture.
~Marie

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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2012

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2012

Thank you. Hugs, Teri