hold me
im lonely and i need you2 total reviews
Comment from Soledadpaz
I suggest you edit for two reasons. One: the font is extremely light in color and barely visible. Two: "your" should be (you're). Good effort, though.
Sol
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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I suggest you edit for two reasons. One: the font is extremely light in color and barely visible. Two: "your" should be (you're). Good effort, though.
Sol
Comment Written 14-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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thank you soo super much i really appreciate you words :)
Comment from E. Fetler
A very heartfelt and sentimental haiku. Very straightforward language. Only criticism - your should be you're (you+are) - wouldn't be a big deal except that this is a writing site (and I'm an English instructor) :) Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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A very heartfelt and sentimental haiku. Very straightforward language. Only criticism - your should be you're (you+are) - wouldn't be a big deal except that this is a writing site (and I'm an English instructor) :) Well done.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2012
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thank you both very much :)
