Quiet Diminutive Days
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Comment from Joan E.
I think I must have missed this one during my jet lag! You certainly captured a serene moment in time. I particularly liked the phrases "gentle spill of light" and "layered shadows. Well done! Hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2012
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I think I must have missed this one during my jet lag! You certainly captured a serene moment in time. I particularly liked the phrases "gentle spill of light" and "layered shadows. Well done! Hugs- Joan
Comment Written 06-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2012
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Joan, such a faithful friend, thank you for reading this work and all the others, as well.
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My pleasure--keep 'em comin'. Hugs- Joan
Comment from Hareem.S
This is such a wonderful free verse, so strong and conveys a quite day in a very lucid manner. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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This is such a wonderful free verse, so strong and conveys a quite day in a very lucid manner. I enjoyed reading this lovely poem.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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Thank you for saying that my poem is lovely. This means a lot to me.
Comment from DALLAS01
I loved this poem, It is exactly how I feel when I am able to be in the moment and appreciate it. You have painted a beautiful canvas of serenity.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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I loved this poem, It is exactly how I feel when I am able to be in the moment and appreciate it. You have painted a beautiful canvas of serenity.
Comment Written 10-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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Nancy, thank you for all these stars in my work. You saw so well what I was trying to tell! Blessings to you.
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you're welcome and it dallas
Comment from Amy Comstock
There is nothing like a beautiful quiet day...one that starts out with a fresh brewed cup of coffee that seems to linger on! Also quite nice when it ends with a glass of wine that also, lingers on! Thanks for sharing amada!
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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There is nothing like a beautiful quiet day...one that starts out with a fresh brewed cup of coffee that seems to linger on! Also quite nice when it ends with a glass of wine that also, lingers on! Thanks for sharing amada!
Comment Written 10-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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Thank you for this sweet and inspiring review dear Amy.
Comment from Doc Holiday
Very quiet, peaceful and satisfying poem.
This is the way I feel after I have just read something written very well and I smile as my eyelids close slowly.
I am at rest and feel content!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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Very quiet, peaceful and satisfying poem.
This is the way I feel after I have just read something written very well and I smile as my eyelids close slowly.
I am at rest and feel content!
Comment Written 09-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2012
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Delighted that my work brought me rest and contentment! Great compliment.
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Sounds like someone who is very content to
be who and where they are. Sounds like me.
Usually I only like poems that rhyme but this is
exceptional and I enjoyed it very much.
Well done. Honeycomb
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Sounds like someone who is very content to
be who and where they are. Sounds like me.
Usually I only like poems that rhyme but this is
exceptional and I enjoyed it very much.
Well done. Honeycomb
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Thank you for commenting in my poem celebrating a quiet days. Most gracious of you.
Comment from Joy Graham
This poem reminds me of the lazy days of summer. I like the picture very much. I feel myself slowing down as I read. I like it very much :)
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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This poem reminds me of the lazy days of summer. I like the picture very much. I feel myself slowing down as I read. I like it very much :)
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Thank you for commenting in my poem on a day when nothing is happening and is beautiful, anyway.
Comment from jadapenn
Amada, this poem brings such peace and delight to the senses. The visual of the morning over a cup of coffee are sensational. There ensues a deep calmness in your words and the flow of the poem is good. Even the clock pendulum adds to the serenity of things.
Well done. luv jada
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Amada, this poem brings such peace and delight to the senses. The visual of the morning over a cup of coffee are sensational. There ensues a deep calmness in your words and the flow of the poem is good. Even the clock pendulum adds to the serenity of things.
Well done. luv jada
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Jada, so nice to hear your lovely comments! Thank you and peace to you.
Comment from beadyredeyes
Lovely poem!
The opening line "quiet diminutive days" is very captivating and the format is effect. Well-chosen line breaks and the use of alliteration help create a very soft, soothing rhythm.
Great job.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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Lovely poem!
The opening line "quiet diminutive days" is very captivating and the format is effect. Well-chosen line breaks and the use of alliteration help create a very soft, soothing rhythm.
Great job.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2012
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Thank you so much for commenting in my work.
Comment from Gay394
'Quiet diminutive days
Knocking on my mellow window sill
your gentle spill of light
lingers soft
on my morning cup.'
The way you have said about the happenings in the
morning as a person gets up is good.
Nice work
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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'Quiet diminutive days
Knocking on my mellow window sill
your gentle spill of light
lingers soft
on my morning cup.'
The way you have said about the happenings in the
morning as a person gets up is good.
Nice work
Comment Written 08-Mar-2012
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2012
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Thank you for the delightful review to my work!
