Firecracker
A Naughty, Naughty Modified Rondeau Redouble ...33 total reviews
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Really? Then where have you been?
Still whether it's bio or not there is a pervasive underlying fury here....who are you angry with?
Or is it all in my mind?
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Really? Then where have you been?
Still whether it's bio or not there is a pervasive underlying fury here....who are you angry with?
Or is it all in my mind?
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Haha, yes all in your mind my friend. I been very busy with a whole bunch of things but mainly a publication I am involved in is whats taking up most of my spare time. There is an underlying fury, (how perceptive)...but this write is just a gross exaggeration of frustrations with the home fires now and again. When I tell him what I want or need I quite often get laughed at...you know? We ladies like the emotional part as well as the fire. Men? Mostly they just want the fire. Its a delicate balance thats all...I also had the word "tallywacker" pop up and I just couldn't shake it so really came up with the whole write based on that delightful word...if it was THIS bad, I would have packed and left by now. When I say NOT a bio...I mean not 100%...there is always an element of me in there somewhere.
Cheers and thanks for your thoughtful review my friend.
Phillippa xoxo
Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
A very nice picture. At first I thought it would be about a firecracker, but it went beyond haha. I like the idea of this poem and also the words you're using. Keep it up
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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A very nice picture. At first I thought it would be about a firecracker, but it went beyond haha. I like the idea of this poem and also the words you're using. Keep it up
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Haha thanks so much...glad you liked my poem and I appreciate your thoughtful comments and review.
Cheers closet
Comment from percival86jack
"Polish up that tallywacker" Looked it up in my "Urban Dictionary"... it said "A gargantious third member"! Can't imagine what that could possibly referring to! LOL She's baaaack... hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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"Polish up that tallywacker" Looked it up in my "Urban Dictionary"... it said "A gargantious third member"! Can't imagine what that could possibly referring to! LOL She's baaaack... hugs, Jack xxxxxxx
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Haha...yes...after an extensive break...well, the longest one I've had, I'm back...many thanks Jack xoxo
Closet
PS Gargantious? Really?
