Comment from mumsyone

Excellent

Heavenly shadows
morning dew on sun dipped bulbs
Can you feel the warmth?

This is a nice 5-7-5. You might want to change the font color, as it isn't showing up well against the blue background. Otherwise, it's good.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012

Thank u for reading my poem, And I will change the font,

reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012

Thank u for reading my poem, And I will change the font,

Comment from HeartsDesire2012

Excellent

You did a very nice job telling a story using 17 syllables. It reminds me of how beautiful the stars shine at night, the morning dew on the bulbs and blades of grass in the morning and the anticipation as the sun begins to rise early afternoon. Feel the warmth, I most certainly do. Thank you so much for sharing. Be encouraged.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012

I'm glad that you could feel the warmth, thank you for reading and replying

reply by HeartsDesire2012 on 24-Feb-2012

It was my pleasure.

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your well-crafted poem captures the essence of spring, which apparently everyone is longing for. The FS website is alive with spring poems--some for contests, some not. Good job

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012

Thank you, spring is easy for me to write about. I'm new to the site and look forward to writing more :)