Mummy Mouse Has a Day Out.
Description in the title.19 total reviews
Comment from Trybuck
I reckon Mummy Mouse deserves a day at the beach without anyone to have to worry about. Well done with telling this story, Buck
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I reckon Mummy Mouse deserves a day at the beach without anyone to have to worry about. Well done with telling this story, Buck
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you Buck! That's so nice of you, Mums do need it once in a while!! Thank you, xsx
Comment from misscookie
I smile as I read yourProse/Poem
every mother can relate we do some much for other and never take time for ours I could late feeling guilty doig something along for youself . this is truth poem it had my attention from the being to the end.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I smile as I read yourProse/Poem
every mother can relate we do some much for other and never take time for ours I could late feeling guilty doig something along for youself . this is truth poem it had my attention from the being to the end.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, misscookie! We do don't we? I am so pleased you also liked this one, I value your reviews so much. xsx
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Your very welcome, Untill next time.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is an absolutely delightful poem. Also, it is skillfully written--proof that form and creativity aren't enemies. I especially like the part about her "guilty pleasure" and how she decided to deal with it. great
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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This is an absolutely delightful poem. Also, it is skillfully written--proof that form and creativity aren't enemies. I especially like the part about her "guilty pleasure" and how she decided to deal with it. great
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you, again, Janice!! Thank you so much, it gives me pleasure to know you read and liked my stories, thank you. xsx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Another winner Sandra.
I love your Mouse family. They are so happy and bright!
Children will love your stories when they are published.
Thank you for sharing their Capers. Honeycomb
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Another winner Sandra.
I love your Mouse family. They are so happy and bright!
Children will love your stories when they are published.
Thank you for sharing their Capers. Honeycomb
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, Honeycomb, for another wonderful review, that is so nice of you! xsx
Comment from kenzi'spoems
My brother Micah who is four, loves animals very much. especially small ones. so when i was looking for a poem to read him to bed last night and he heard me mutter 'mummy Mouse' he was like 'THAT ONE!" so this one it was. He did not fall asleep during this poem like he usually does when i read him to sleep, and instead asked me to read it a second time. needless to say, he loved it.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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My brother Micah who is four, loves animals very much. especially small ones. so when i was looking for a poem to read him to bed last night and he heard me mutter 'mummy Mouse' he was like 'THAT ONE!" so this one it was. He did not fall asleep during this poem like he usually does when i read him to sleep, and instead asked me to read it a second time. needless to say, he loved it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Kenzi, and please thank you little brother, it is lovely to know that he liked it. Thank you for this really special review. xsx
Comment from hellion5
Please tell me this is a 400 chapter book, or you have another just like it already in mind. I await each new post with childlike anticipation.
squeaked with delight--love it!
Thanks for the smile--
Sue
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Please tell me this is a 400 chapter book, or you have another just like it already in mind. I await each new post with childlike anticipation.
squeaked with delight--love it!
Thanks for the smile--
Sue
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Oh, Sue, I do love your reviews!! Thank you so much, the next one is almost ready. Thanks for your continued support. xsx
Comment from Amy Comstock
This is sweet and so adorable! I love how your words flow..and your rhythm and rhyme is spot on! Thank you for sharing this lovely story!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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This is sweet and so adorable! I love how your words flow..and your rhythm and rhyme is spot on! Thank you for sharing this lovely story!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you Amy, I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for this lovely review.xsx
Comment from c_lucas
It is always fun to have a day to oneself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. Good job.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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It is always fun to have a day to oneself. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting read. Good job.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you so much, c_lucas, for this lovely review. I appreciate it a lot, thankyou. xsx
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You're welcome, Sandra. Charlie
Comment from LilHippie
Absolutely precious. Just precious!!!! Loved it. I am writing a childrens book myself and terrified about the publsihing process, knowing the childrens book genre is an overcrowded market. Do not want to, cannot afford to, self publish. Anyway, sorry, back to your lovely poem. I love all of it. She did everything she had to do for her family that day, and took the free time to enjoy herself. Like all of us mommies. I love the good time she had at the beach and that her thoughts were to bring the children there at week's end. Just adorable. Good family values, mouse style!! Thank you for allowing my comments.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Absolutely precious. Just precious!!!! Loved it. I am writing a childrens book myself and terrified about the publsihing process, knowing the childrens book genre is an overcrowded market. Do not want to, cannot afford to, self publish. Anyway, sorry, back to your lovely poem. I love all of it. She did everything she had to do for her family that day, and took the free time to enjoy herself. Like all of us mommies. I love the good time she had at the beach and that her thoughts were to bring the children there at week's end. Just adorable. Good family values, mouse style!! Thank you for allowing my comments.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2012
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Thank you so very much, LilHippie, that is so kind of you. I am looking to publish my stories too, and I agree, it's very hard going. But we must persevere!! Thank you again, and perhaps you will let me know when you post one of your stories so I can have a read? xsx
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Oh, thank you, I will. Good luck to you also and let me know how you fare with your works.
