Auschwitz Souls
Seeing the souls of Auschwitz dead.30 total reviews
Comment from catch22
This is a very sad and emotional poem about the tragedy of the Holocaust. I did not lose any family there, but I sympathize with any people that have endured cruelty. Genocide is the ultimate form of cruelty. The phrasing and word choices convey a deep sense of compassion for the plight of those who suffered.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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This is a very sad and emotional poem about the tragedy of the Holocaust. I did not lose any family there, but I sympathize with any people that have endured cruelty. Genocide is the ultimate form of cruelty. The phrasing and word choices convey a deep sense of compassion for the plight of those who suffered.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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gail, thanks so much for reading and understanding. Linda
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You are welcome. Thank you for sharing this piece.
Comment from Espresso momma
What a story they will have to share of the peace that only God can give. No more horror stories of pain and death. I like your poem of a possitive note . Thanks.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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What a story they will have to share of the peace that only God can give. No more horror stories of pain and death. I like your poem of a possitive note . Thanks.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Expresso momma, thanks so much for reading and understanding. Linda
Comment from adewpearl
vivid and compelling descriptive detail
strong expression of intense emotion
good sensory appeal to senses not only the visual
excellent consonance of soft S sounds in misplaced souls
This is a most powerful poem about the horrors of Aushwitz
I like the spiritual, upbeat ending Brooke
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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vivid and compelling descriptive detail
strong expression of intense emotion
good sensory appeal to senses not only the visual
excellent consonance of soft S sounds in misplaced souls
This is a most powerful poem about the horrors of Aushwitz
I like the spiritual, upbeat ending Brooke
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2012
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Brooke, thank you for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo Lively Linda ...
In your well-written free-thought presentation, your descriptive words provide your readers with a vivid image of what the poor people at Auschwitz must have endured as they waited to know their fate. The line that impressed me most is the last one ...
"and Heaven awaits them all."
Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Hullo Lively Linda ...
In your well-written free-thought presentation, your descriptive words provide your readers with a vivid image of what the poor people at Auschwitz must have endured as they waited to know their fate. The line that impressed me most is the last one ...
"and Heaven awaits them all."
Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
Love from .... Nanette Mary.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Nanette Mary, Thanks so much for reading and understanding the need for this poem. Linda
Comment from Doc Holiday
Excellent write with vivid images and memories of the terrible atrocities of the Aushwitz Prisons. Your poem is a tribute to their souls. May they never be forgotten!
Nice work!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Excellent write with vivid images and memories of the terrible atrocities of the Aushwitz Prisons. Your poem is a tribute to their souls. May they never be forgotten!
Nice work!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you, Doc Holiday, for reading and understanding. Linda
Comment from c_lucas
Man inhumanity to man is still going on, some place in this Christian World. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Man inhumanity to man is still going on, some place in this Christian World. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thanks c. Linda
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You're welcome, Linda. Charlie
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Linda,
I read the book called Auschwitz and had hard time reading such a sad story. I couldn't believe what the Germans did to the Jews and I agree those they killed or burned to death should have a place in heaven waiting for them. Once I knew a man who lived through Auschwitz by helping the Germans in their lab. The rest of his family died in the ovens. You have written this story well with stark reality and stunning words, sadly I don't have a six for you. Well done....blessings, chey
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Hi Linda,
I read the book called Auschwitz and had hard time reading such a sad story. I couldn't believe what the Germans did to the Jews and I agree those they killed or burned to death should have a place in heaven waiting for them. Once I knew a man who lived through Auschwitz by helping the Germans in their lab. The rest of his family died in the ovens. You have written this story well with stark reality and stunning words, sadly I don't have a six for you. Well done....blessings, chey
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you for reading and understanding, chey. Linda
Comment from doubleblank
I thought your work was brilliant. It is such a horrible subject, but should never be forgotten what happened to all them poor souls. Your writing made me think that way. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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I thought your work was brilliant. It is such a horrible subject, but should never be forgotten what happened to all them poor souls. Your writing made me think that way. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you for reading and understanding. Linda
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
It is a horrible story to read, even worse to know it's true. This must never, ever be forgotten. Man's cruelty to another human being. It is no good asking how it could have happened, it did, and that is truth. I hope your poem goes round all the corners of the world! I didn't enjoy it, but I think you did an excellent job in the writing and wish I had a six left to give you. Very well done! xsx
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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It is a horrible story to read, even worse to know it's true. This must never, ever be forgotten. Man's cruelty to another human being. It is no good asking how it could have happened, it did, and that is truth. I hope your poem goes round all the corners of the world! I didn't enjoy it, but I think you did an excellent job in the writing and wish I had a six left to give you. Very well done! xsx
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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We need to be reminded of this stark reality from time to time. Linda
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow your poem is great work my friend heaven knows how those people felt packed into trains and sent to these killing places a great tribute to them and their suffering xgazzax
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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wow your poem is great work my friend heaven knows how those people felt packed into trains and sent to these killing places a great tribute to them and their suffering xgazzax
Comment Written 25-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2012
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Thank you for understanding, gazzagodbod. Linda
